Riley

andyvarney
Posted 07/09/2009 - 11:46 Link
I took this yesterday while I was out on a car run in Coventry. Most of the pictures I took were hopeless but I would like some c&c on this one please?

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v48/avarney/PENTAX%20FORUM%20PICS/RILEY.jpg[/IMG]

Cheers,
Andy
It's not the size of the dog in the fight, but the size of the fight in the dog!
mikew
Posted 07/09/2009 - 12:47 Link
Blur on the flag is a really great touch. You've also made the best of some rough looking light. There's a lot in the shot though - it's quite busy.
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Thordell
Posted 07/09/2009 - 13:05 Link
The flag blur is a good idea but I find the flag distracting from the main subject. There is within the shot three items to catch the eye the flag is not helpful imo, must explain that I am not sufficiently knowledgeable to make helpful technical comment on the shot but only give my impression of it. Must say it would seem you have done well in the available light, just a shame about the flag and pole.
Jackie H
K7, K20D, istDS, Optio SV, ME
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50mm f1.4, 60-250mm, 28-80mm,
Sigma 105mm 2.8 Macro & Bertha 50-500
andyvarney
Posted 07/09/2009 - 13:14 Link
I agree, I have done three crops and they all look ok.

I am quite happy for someone to edit the picture if they wish.

I took this particular car because the Riley car was developed and the initial vehicles built at my neighbours house before they moved production to Coventry.

Cheers,
Andy
It's not the size of the dog in the fight, but the size of the fight in the dog!
Marcus1
Posted 07/09/2009 - 13:38 Link
Agree with some that the flag pole is a bit of a distraction, not helped by the variety of other lines, grill, bonnet chrome, windscreen surround. They do not seem to lead anywhere, for me the pole makes for confusing image. Maybe if the flag pole was also chrome :Lovely motor car. Did you use a poloriser?
K10D 50-200mm, 18-55mm, Battery Grip, AF360FGZ flash, Manfrotto Tripod.
Other stuff includes Programme A, Takumar 70-200mm, Rollei Prega 145AF - Still in its box, Pentax Zoom 105R,Olympus OM2n,a Fuji Digital Finepix.
Thordell
Posted 07/09/2009 - 13:54 Link
Quick visit to PS and a change of mode - sure you could do a lot better think even I could given time

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v173/Thordell/Car.jpg[/IMG]
Jackie H
K7, K20D, istDS, Optio SV, ME
Most used glass
50mm f1.4, 60-250mm, 28-80mm,
Sigma 105mm 2.8 Macro & Bertha 50-500
andyvarney
Posted 07/09/2009 - 14:08 Link
Just a UV filter.

I've put my three crop efforts below.

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v48/avarney/PENTAX%20FORUM%20PICS/RILEYcrop1.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v48/avarney/PENTAX%20FORUM%20PICS/RILEYcrop2.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v48/avarney/PENTAX%20FORUM%20PICS/RILEYcrop3.jpg[/IMG]

That looks great without the flag, how did you do that?

Cheers,
Andy
It's not the size of the dog in the fight, but the size of the fight in the dog!
Marcus1
Posted 07/09/2009 - 16:14 Link
Top one for me.Less busy without the flag. Is that your camera lens, reflected in the spot light:
K10D 50-200mm, 18-55mm, Battery Grip, AF360FGZ flash, Manfrotto Tripod.
Other stuff includes Programme A, Takumar 70-200mm, Rollei Prega 145AF - Still in its box, Pentax Zoom 105R,Olympus OM2n,a Fuji Digital Finepix.
Father Ted
Posted 07/09/2009 - 16:26 Link
The first of the cropped images for me too

It emphasises the symmetry between the grille and the lens of the light.
Getting there! Thanks to you guys

Pentax K3ii, Pentax K10d, Kit lens ( 18-55mm ), 50mm f1.7 lens, Tamron 70-300mm lens, Prinzflex 70-162 manual lens, Various old flashes.
Thordell
Posted 07/09/2009 - 16:38 Link
Yes I like the first crop as well.

How did I remove the flag pole? I just cloned it out a very quick job and it could be done much better, changing to black & white and brightening a bit are the only other changes I did apart from the crop.
Jackie H
K7, K20D, istDS, Optio SV, ME
Most used glass
50mm f1.4, 60-250mm, 28-80mm,
Sigma 105mm 2.8 Macro & Bertha 50-500

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