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Portrait with 55-300

JamieT
Posted 01/02/2012 - 22:29 Link
My cousins first born.

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Need to practice some eye PP techniques.
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puma
Posted 01/02/2012 - 22:39 Link
Great moment captured!
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davidstorm
Posted 01/02/2012 - 23:37 Link
Beautiful.

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Frogfish
Posted 02/02/2012 - 03:49 Link
Lovely baby but the eyes don't look right to me Jamie. Maybe it's the angle of the reflection, maybe the flash points are too bright (if you were bouncing the flash or had it diffused then you wouldn't get those). Love the rest of the shot !
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Edited by Frogfish: 02/02/2012 - 03:50
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Posted 02/02/2012 - 06:56 Link
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Frankie
Posted 02/02/2012 - 11:24 Link
Looks perfect to me. I want one. Congratulations to your cousin.
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JamieT
Posted 02/02/2012 - 21:45 Link
The eyes were slightly destroyed by my poor PP technique. I shall have another go!
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JamieT
Posted 02/02/2012 - 22:17 Link
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Slightly more subtle.....
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carkaci
Posted 05/02/2012 - 10:54 Link
Excellent result with 55-300 What a cute baby !
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ChrisA
Posted 05/02/2012 - 13:24 Link
JamieT wrote:
Slightly more subtle.....

It is much more subtle - before there was a distinct suggestion of possession about it!

However, I'm not sure you need the dots of light at all.

It's taken with natural light, right? There's already a perfectly natural reflection from a window or something in both eyes.

I love the subdued, peaceful look.To my eyes, it's a very attractive capture, of a not-at-all bad looking baby. Perhaps just a shade more brightness would be better, but I won't quibble there.

So I don't see why you need some faked catchlights at all. Or am I misunderstandig something about the lighting set up?
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Edited by ChrisA: 05/02/2012 - 13:25
JamieT
Posted 05/02/2012 - 14:23 Link
Thanks Chris,

When I look back now I see how ridiculous they were!

There was a window some way behind and I was experimenting with a basic Metz flash for the first time. I had used bounce for most of the photos, but cannot recall how it was positioned for this shot, I imagine it was directed to the subject.

This is an 'original' version before I bothered tampering with the eyes (now slightly brighter)

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Would you leave them as they are?
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Edited by JamieT: 05/02/2012 - 14:24
ChrisA
Posted 05/02/2012 - 17:23 Link
JamieT wrote:
When I look back now I see how ridiculous they were!

It's easily done.

The best thing, I find, when I can't make up my mind whether I've been messing with a photo too long on the computer, is to leave it till the next day.

I usually take one look, and go 'aaaaaargghhh'

Amazing the difference a fresh look can make.

I'd be inclined to go in there and carefully remove the light dots altogether. They're so small that they don't add anything, and almost look like hot pixels.

Much better now, though. Very nice, in fact. I wouldn't have guessed there was any flash at all, if not for the dots.

Respect to you, btw, for leaving the different versions up. Sometimes, people replace the earlier versions, rendering the thread a bit pointless. Hopefully it'll help someone.
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Edited by ChrisA: 05/02/2012 - 17:24
Blaze
Posted 05/02/2012 - 18:19 Link
It's a beautiful shot and the colouring is just perfect.
Funnily enough, I loved the first one, but it was only on seeing the subsequent ones that I could see that the light spots were too harsh and not quite right.

I have no doubt we'll be seeing more
Edited by Blaze: 05/02/2012 - 18:20
JamieT
Posted 05/02/2012 - 18:54 Link
Maybe just one more!

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