Photo Critique (2)

Posted 03/10/2013 - 14:17 Link
How about this one guys?


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bforbes
Posted 03/10/2013 - 14:32 Link
how about...

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Posted 03/10/2013 - 15:08 Link
I tried that but then thought the wood split on the left side was too overwhelming.

Perhaps though the LB should be further bottom right
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bettyswolloks
Posted 03/10/2013 - 16:47 Link
Either would be perfect if that split run up at a nice straight 90 degree vertical!!
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Posted 03/10/2013 - 17:06 Link
Ill have to get talking to these bugs
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bforbes
Posted 03/10/2013 - 17:16 Link
bettyswolloks wrote:
Either would be perfect if that split run up at a nice straight 90 degree vertical!!
OK

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bettyswolloks
Posted 03/10/2013 - 20:27 Link
I get that to 92.5 but a big improvement! Thanx
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Gamka
Posted 04/10/2013 - 09:41 - Helpful Comment Link
I prefer the variants from bforbes showing less timber on the left. Your original suggests you are stressing the shake(split)and the ladybird just happens to be there.
Posted 04/10/2013 - 11:43 Link
Yep!

Cheers
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