Photo - Stacking?

coker
Posted 28/06/2010 - 22:06 Link
Waiting for that rainy day?
At the back of one of our village Churches.

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C&C Please.

Coker
The more I look, the more there is to see!
George Lazarette
Posted 28/06/2010 - 22:54 Link
It's a little over-exposed, and lacking in contrast. I should tackle that first. (However, I would mention that I am viewing this on a poor laptop screen; it might look rather different on yours.)

I would also crop the top and left hand edges, leaving just the tiles.

These two steps will (IMO) give you a stronger image with more impact.

It's fun to play with images like this, and this one is certainly not without possibilities. Seeing such possibilities in a mundane object like a pile of tiles is a large part of the art of photography.

G
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coker
Posted 28/06/2010 - 23:37 Link
Thanks, George.

You're right. Cropped is better, all the content now seems to have more relevance to the whole image.

Have adjusted the exposure but didn't like an increase in contrast.
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Best Regards,

Roger
The more I look, the more there is to see!
pschlute
Posted 29/06/2010 - 09:03 Link
Yes I think the tighter crop works much better. I would go for a bit more contrast and saturation.
bwlchmawr
Posted 29/06/2010 - 18:16 Link
Of course I like this! It's very much my sort of thing, cursed as I am, by seeing pictures in the least likely places.

I like the great range of hues and the bits of lichen, the spider's web...I think trimming the top works well, better, but I'd have left the wall because it gives the tiles something upon which to lean.

Nice work.
Best wishes,

Andrew

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coker
Posted 29/06/2010 - 20:06 Link
Andrew,

I thought you might...!?

I can't remember whose it is but someone has the by-line (& I am probably mis-quoting):

No amount of equipment can take the place of an ability to notice.

I hope I / we all can continue to develope that skill, surely a major contributory factor in any "good" image.

Thanks to you all for your kind encouragement.

Best Regards,

Roger.
The more I look, the more there is to see!
i-Berg
Posted 02/07/2010 - 11:01 Link
Roger, I've taken a different approach and slightly decreased the contrast and sat, and had a play with the curves while I was at it amongst other things.

Happy to post, it's on Photobucket for now.
coker
Posted 02/07/2010 - 16:57 Link
Please post, i-Berg.
Thanks,
Roger
The more I look, the more there is to see!
i-Berg
Posted 03/07/2010 - 00:09 Link
FWIW, here we go Roger...

[IMG]http://i772.photobucket.com/albums/yy9/i_berg/Pentax%20User%20Forum%20Images/Sherrwed2010-06-16013adj1-1.jpg[/IMG]

Just one personal interpretation, mind.
coker
Posted 03/07/2010 - 08:50 Link
Thanks, i-Berg.

I find these re-workings of images fascinating, inasmuch as the original scene is still in one's mind, the image taken underlines that memory... but then a different view/interpretation is presented & I find it quite strange, even a little disconserting; was the original scene really as I remember/remembered it?

This is ,in no way, meant to decry your image & I thank you for it.

Best Regards,

Roger.
The more I look, the more there is to see!
Pentaxophile
Posted 03/07/2010 - 11:04 Link
Yep if photography just presented the image exactly as seen, what a boring thing it would be.

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