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Posted 05/04/2020 - 23:35
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I like no. 1 as the path actually does lead you through the picture. Initially disappears over the hill, reappears by the bush in middle distance and skirts the trees to lead your view to the tower on the horizon.
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Posted 06/04/2020 - 09:17
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No.1 is my preference - personally I would chop off the right third completely, removing the dark bush and branches and making the subtle coloured areas the main focus (just my opinion though!)
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Posted 06/04/2020 - 12:04
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Now I like number two for it's minimalist approach.
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Posted 06/04/2020 - 13:08
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LennyBloke wrote:
No.1 is my preference - personally I would chop off the right third completely, removing the dark bush and branches and making the subtle coloured areas the main focus (just my opinion though!)
I agree.No.1 is my preference - personally I would chop off the right third completely, removing the dark bush and branches and making the subtle coloured areas the main focus (just my opinion though!)
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Posted 06/04/2020 - 14:01
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Lenniebloke said, I would chop off the right third completely, removing the dark bush and branches
But then you would be left with the next in line dark bush and branches ???
But then you would be left with the next in line dark bush and branches ???
Posted 06/04/2020 - 14:44
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This is roughly what I mean (hope you don't mind Steve)....

I've over-warmed it a little - but this is direction I meant :

I've over-warmed it a little - but this is direction I meant :
LennyBloke
Posted 06/04/2020 - 22:48
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No. 2 for me...simple and abstract feel I like.
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Posted 07/04/2020 - 10:56
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So, votes for both! Excellent. As I said, like would be boring if we all liked the same thing.
Keep the comments coming, folks. Civilised discussion with different points of view is one of the great joys of life.
Steve
PRYorkshire wrote:
the path actually does lead you through the picture.
Well spotted. You're right about the path continuing into the distance. Perhaps I should have lead you all up the garden path with a picture showing fragments of path that are actually from different paths. Something to work on...the path actually does lead you through the picture.
LennyBloke wrote:
This is roughly what I mean (hope you don't mind Steve)....
That's fine, crop away, it's always interesting to see what different people can do with the same starting material. Your version changes the feel of the picture for me. More relaxing, the eye doesn't need to move far, it knows where to go. For me, the two versions are pictures for different days, different moods.This is roughly what I mean (hope you don't mind Steve)....
Keep the comments coming, folks. Civilised discussion with different points of view is one of the great joys of life.
Steve
Posted 07/04/2020 - 21:35
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Lubbyman wrote:
So, votes for both! Excellent. As I said, like would be boring if we all liked the same thing.
Keep the comments coming, folks. Civilised discussion with different points of view is one of the great joys of life.
Steve
Steve: I like the bushes on the right and find they help lead your eye along the path but find the tree in top right distracting. So my suggested crop is as follows, plus converted to b&w to give an alternative.So, votes for both! Excellent. As I said, like would be boring if we all liked the same thing.
PRYorkshire wrote:
the path actually does lead you through the picture.
Well spotted. You're right about the path continuing into the distance. Perhaps I should have lead you all up the garden path with a picture showing fragments of path that are actually from different paths. Something to work on...the path actually does lead you through the picture.
LennyBloke wrote:
This is roughly what I mean (hope you don't mind Steve)....
That's fine, crop away, it's always interesting to see what different people can do with the same starting material. Your version changes the feel of the picture for me. More relaxing, the eye doesn't need to move far, it knows where to go. For me, the two versions are pictures for different days, different moods.This is roughly what I mean (hope you don't mind Steve)....
Keep the comments coming, folks. Civilised discussion with different points of view is one of the great joys of life.
Steve
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K1000, Espio 140, ist, istD, K70, K3iii and numerous lenses, just don't tell my wife.
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