park and fish
Posted 25/02/2014 - 12:43
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A bit more contrast might help but I don't see anything in the subject itself to suggest the image is worth effort. Not one I'd pick from the light table myself.
Posted 25/02/2014 - 14:15
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I can see what attracted you to the subject, but I think all the grasses and stalks make it all rather messy and complex and the lack of detail in the water bothers me. I would like to have seen the bike and tree really sharp and standing out against the less sharp background, but I like the basic idea of the bloke fishing, having left his bike leaning against a tree.
Miles
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