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Posted 18/02/2010 - 18:48
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I like them too, particularly the second one.
Posted 18/02/2010 - 19:22
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They're disconcerting and disorientating to me. Good to try something differnt though.The buildings are excellent subjects. I love photographing modern architecture.
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A.
Regards,
A.
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Andrew
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Robert Adams
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Posted 18/02/2010 - 19:26
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unless the suggestion is illegal, immoral or significantly dangerous, try anything and find out what happens.
I find no.2 to be an interesting abstract, my eye is fascinated by trying to figure out what it is.
I find no.2 to be an interesting abstract, my eye is fascinated by trying to figure out what it is.
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but it does help
but it does help
Posted 18/02/2010 - 20:48
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mikew wrote:
They both seem to lack some killer element which I suspect is the sky which is a bit wishy washy.
I think you have it there, lack of interest in the sky.They both seem to lack some killer element which I suspect is the sky which is a bit wishy washy.
I like the building in the first one best but the sky is??? well not really anything.
Bob
Posted 18/02/2010 - 21:48
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My photography tutor would love both of them
I like the second one
I like the second one
let the education continue
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Posted 18/02/2010 - 23:17
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Thanks for the comments everyone! I agree about the sky, it wasn't the best. Unfortunately it's been a bit rubbish here for the last few months
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Posted 18/02/2010 - 23:24
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I like no.1
Those apartments look familiar, Tim. Are they the ones on Hills Rd, Cambridge?
Those apartments look familiar, Tim. Are they the ones on Hills Rd, Cambridge?
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Posted 18/02/2010 - 23:32
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Yes Matt that's the ones! On the other side of Hills Road from the blue Travelodge. I'd been to see Avatar in the cineplex next door, the 2nd shot is the car park where I parked
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Posted 18/02/2010 - 23:47
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The first one looks like the ship is sinking!
Sorry, but that is what is says to me.
Sorry, but that is what is says to me.
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Posted 18/02/2010 - 23:50
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polchraine wrote:
The first one looks like the ship is sinking!
Sorry, but that is what is says to me.
I'm soooo glad someone apart from me thinks it looks like a ship! Perhaps I'm not mad hehe
The first one looks like the ship is sinking!
Sorry, but that is what is says to me.
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Posted 19/02/2010 - 06:11
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Tim,
Perhaps try the second image in BW?
It might take the focus away from an intrusive sky, and put it onto a great structure with some strong, photogenic lines.
Alternatively, you could replace the sky using a mask?
Perhaps try the second image in BW?
It might take the focus away from an intrusive sky, and put it onto a great structure with some strong, photogenic lines.
Alternatively, you could replace the sky using a mask?
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