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Posted 08/02/2014 - 20:50
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Although I should really hesitate before C&Cing the Blythmaster...
I like them in (more or less) the reverse order they're presented.
The concept of #1 is great (repeating arcs?) but I'm not sure the balance in the composition quite works here. Too much space at the top right.
#2 is maybe a bit overcooked in the PP (colour) though this might be my monitor, and tilts left a little? Odd kinks in the strips of floor tiles as well (distortion?).
The reflection is great.. but I find the security camera a little distracting (it draws the eye a little too much compared to the reflections)... partly perhaps as it's hard up against the frame.
The Civic Centre shot is classy. Love the textures and the receding space. I think the angles work well.
Neptune is a fascinating angle and nicely composed... with great tones and colour interest.
So for me it's the last 2
I like them in (more or less) the reverse order they're presented.
The concept of #1 is great (repeating arcs?) but I'm not sure the balance in the composition quite works here. Too much space at the top right.
#2 is maybe a bit overcooked in the PP (colour) though this might be my monitor, and tilts left a little? Odd kinks in the strips of floor tiles as well (distortion?).
The reflection is great.. but I find the security camera a little distracting (it draws the eye a little too much compared to the reflections)... partly perhaps as it's hard up against the frame.
The Civic Centre shot is classy. Love the textures and the receding space. I think the angles work well.
Neptune is a fascinating angle and nicely composed... with great tones and colour interest.
So for me it's the last 2
Posted 08/02/2014 - 21:15
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I like them all ... Very well observed and exposures and processing all most effective. The security camera one will reward a lot of different angles. I'd play a bit with the white balance on the arcade ... Maybe its accurate, but the greeny hue doesn't work too well on a photo I feel.
Look forward to seeing many more like this Alan.
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Posted 08/02/2014 - 21:50
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the last two images are nice - great depth and tonality. head and shoulders above the rest
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Posted 08/02/2014 - 22:19
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Thanks for the comments guys. Its ok Stan. I don't see much either. Its difficult trying something different
You'll no doubt realise that architecture isn't quite my thing !!! Trying to get a couple worthy of entering the comp at the club. Didn't want to just give it a miss.
Tim, see what you mean about the first one. Think it may benefit from a bird or two in that space. If I knew what I was doing in photoshop, I might have added a couple.
#2 was an HDR. I did reduce the vibrancy once I got it back in lightroom. Here's a straight shot. Didn't quite do it for me. Hence the HDR in desperation Maybe I should just forget this one. Not sure as to distortion Tim. The floors aren't perfect. It was built over 100 years ago. For the past35 years or so its had the metro system running underneath it.

Unfortunately for the third, there was scaffolding up, which greatly reduced my options for reflections. Just my luck when I need to get entries in
The fourth is a real shame. There's some lovely coloured brickwork on the roof, but there was just too much flare for a shot in colour.
The last one is ok.
My favourite was the first one, but I think Tim is right. 2nd favourite was the reflection at Eldon Square, despite the limitations due to the scaffolding
You'll no doubt realise that architecture isn't quite my thing !!! Trying to get a couple worthy of entering the comp at the club. Didn't want to just give it a miss.
Tim, see what you mean about the first one. Think it may benefit from a bird or two in that space. If I knew what I was doing in photoshop, I might have added a couple.
#2 was an HDR. I did reduce the vibrancy once I got it back in lightroom. Here's a straight shot. Didn't quite do it for me. Hence the HDR in desperation Maybe I should just forget this one. Not sure as to distortion Tim. The floors aren't perfect. It was built over 100 years ago. For the past35 years or so its had the metro system running underneath it.

Unfortunately for the third, there was scaffolding up, which greatly reduced my options for reflections. Just my luck when I need to get entries in
The fourth is a real shame. There's some lovely coloured brickwork on the roof, but there was just too much flare for a shot in colour.
The last one is ok.
My favourite was the first one, but I think Tim is right. 2nd favourite was the reflection at Eldon Square, despite the limitations due to the scaffolding
Posted 09/02/2014 - 05:47
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Used to just about buy every Record from Windows when I was a lad Alan.
Great set and your braver than me for trying something competely different, architecture is not my bag either but I can't see much wrong here to be honest, I'd be proud to have taken them...
Great set and your braver than me for trying something competely different, architecture is not my bag either but I can't see much wrong here to be honest, I'd be proud to have taken them...
Cheers Jules...
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Posted 09/02/2014 - 10:17
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I have no real critique of the images because I quite like them all.
I have only one question; where are all the people? Presumably Newcastle was shut on this day
Whenever I try an take pictures of buildings there are always loads of irritating people in the way The only time I get to see empty streets is when I'm trying to take pictures of people
I have only one question; where are all the people? Presumably Newcastle was shut on this day
Whenever I try an take pictures of buildings there are always loads of irritating people in the way The only time I get to see empty streets is when I'm trying to take pictures of people
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Posted 09/02/2014 - 10:42
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Its a fine set Alan. #1 shows the classic lines of the Sage mirroring the Tyne Bridge to perfection. I like the Central Arcade picture, its fantastic architecture. I'm another one who bought all his LPs and CDs at Windows in that Arcade. The concrete arcade at the Civic Centre looks so much more interesting in your photo than it does for real.
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PS: Ralph Hardwick raises an interesting point. Where are all the people. I've never seen Newcastle looking that empty.
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Posted 09/02/2014 - 11:10
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PS: Ralph Hardwick raises an interesting point. Where are all the people. I've never seen Newcastle looking that empty.
With Alan it could be sunrise or patience.PS: Ralph Hardwick raises an interesting point. Where are all the people. I've never seen Newcastle looking that empty.
I like #4, but could I offer a different crop for #3

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Posted 09/02/2014 - 20:34
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Thanks guys
The Sage was a bit early for most people, although there was someone getting fit with there personal trainer. Central Arcade just happened. I would have been quite happy to include 1 or 2 people, but it just emptied. The part of the Civic Centre I went to is more a Mon- Fri place so that was deserted.
Like your edit Barrie. Didn't think the camera detracted from the image, but I can see it does now.
The Sage was a bit early for most people, although there was someone getting fit with there personal trainer. Central Arcade just happened. I would have been quite happy to include 1 or 2 people, but it just emptied. The part of the Civic Centre I went to is more a Mon- Fri place so that was deserted.
Like your edit Barrie. Didn't think the camera detracted from the image, but I can see it does now.
Posted 20/03/2014 - 23:18
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Blythman wrote:
David, Barrie just thought I'd mention we had Angy Ellis from your club judge our architecture competition tonight.
Very good judge
Should warn you, Angy uses Canon.David, Barrie just thought I'd mention we had Angy Ellis from your club judge our architecture competition tonight.
Very good judge
David
Posted 21/03/2014 - 12:36
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Lovely images, Alan, and bringing back fond memories of shopping in the Arcade in the 50s
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Posted 21/03/2014 - 17:18
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I like the compositions and the processing - a nice set, Alan.
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Anyway, Architecture is our Theme competition this year at the camera club.
Had a walk around town today. C&C most welcome
Curves - old and new by Alan Wennington, on Flickr
Central Arcade by Alan Wennington, on Flickr
Eldon Square reflection by Alan Wennington, on Flickr
Newcastle Civic Centre by Alan Wennington, on Flickr
Neptune by Alan Wennington, on Flickr
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