Newbie composition advise sought
Posted 30/11/2008 - 01:41
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It is a very attractive picture, I think it would benefit by removing a large amount from the top. I understand why you have kept the top of the hood in but there is too much forehead which stops me looking at the rest of his face. I wouldn't agonise too much over it.
Ken
Ken
Ken
“We must avoid however, snapping away, shooting quickly and without thought, overloading ourselves with unnecessary images that clutter our memory and diminish the clarity of the whole.” - Henri Cartier-Bresson -
“We must avoid however, snapping away, shooting quickly and without thought, overloading ourselves with unnecessary images that clutter our memory and diminish the clarity of the whole.” - Henri Cartier-Bresson -
Posted 30/11/2008 - 03:39
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the composition is not bad, but not that good either... but the lighting is nice. the exposure looks good. The expression is lovely.
Just an all round nice shot. Most parents would be very happy to get shots like that.
Just an all round nice shot. Most parents would be very happy to get shots like that.
Fired many shots. Didn't kill anything.
Posted 30/11/2008 - 13:44
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Hi JPC1970,
Welcome to the forum when you have a moment would you please fill in your location profile...Ta!
Welcome to the forum when you have a moment would you please fill in your location profile...Ta!
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17 years
Berkshire,
England
I am quite an in-experienced photographer after some advise. I took this photo about 2 years ago of my son and although it's my son the photo stood out above all the others to me that I took. Can I get some advise on why this photo stood out to me. Is the composition good or is it just because it's me son that I like the photo so much ? Not worried to much about colours/sharpening only the composition,
Thanks for all your honest C & C.
Jason
Joshua Photo