My Niece

Infrabasse
Posted 17/04/2012 - 21:22 Link
Here's my niece daydreaming over her pancake breakfast.
I'll delete this in a few days but since I'm really happy with it I still wanted to show.

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K-5 with DA35 or DA40 (not sure as the exif is gone and I'm not on my PC with the original file)
A touch of lightroom and Silver Efex Pro

Hope you like it
Edited by Infrabasse: 17/04/2012 - 21:46
snappychappy
Posted 18/04/2012 - 07:40 Link
It is a nice expression on her face, not bad a shot. If you were to critique it then the background would spoil it because it is slightly cluttered.
Infrabasse
Posted 18/04/2012 - 07:51 Link
Thanks, I thought she was really cute

Yeah, the distracting background, I got rid of a nasty shadow on that wall but there's only so much I can do. Maybe I could clone out the laundry basket and change it into an extra super wide sofa

If only everyone lived in a photo studio
Edited by Infrabasse: 18/04/2012 - 07:52
snappychappy
Posted 18/04/2012 - 08:22 Link
Cuteness without a doubt, it is difficult in home situations but you have done very well, the depth of field is spot on with the background nicely blurred.
Infrabasse
Posted 19/04/2012 - 13:21 Link
For the lolz
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Edges aren't perfect but it gives an idea.
I find the 2nd one too empty.
gartmore
Posted 19/04/2012 - 13:24 Link
you might do well to get rid of all that empty space above her head,too.
Ken
“We must avoid however, snapping away, shooting quickly and without thought, overloading ourselves with unnecessary images that clutter our memory and diminish the clarity of the whole.” - Henri Cartier-Bresson -
Infrabasse
Posted 19/04/2012 - 13:32 Link
You mean crop it ?
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Hmm you're right it does help
Thanks for your input
Edited by Infrabasse: 19/04/2012 - 13:43
gartmore
Posted 19/04/2012 - 13:56 Link
I'd go even further
Ken
“We must avoid however, snapping away, shooting quickly and without thought, overloading ourselves with unnecessary images that clutter our memory and diminish the clarity of the whole.” - Henri Cartier-Bresson -
techno-terminator
Posted 19/04/2012 - 14:15 Link
You have lost a little detail from the face while dealing with the background - and somehow she is not quite the same - look at the skin tones on her right cheek again.

Not a clue how I could correct that . Perhaps start from the Master and crop as Ken suggested ?
let the education continue

proud owner of a couple of cameras and a few bits and bobs
Infrabasse
Posted 19/04/2012 - 14:18 Link
Yeah that's due to a Silver Efex reprocess.
I haven't handled it the same way. I wish this program had a "last settings used" like photomatix does. Think I'm gonna have to save presets for every project.

Anyway, starting the edit from scratch now, trying to have a better separation from the background.
Will post the result here once I'm done
Edited by Infrabasse: 19/04/2012 - 14:18
Infrabasse
Posted 19/04/2012 - 16:06 Link
Ok,

I think I'll settle with this
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I've been staring at this picture for too long now I can't see the differences anymore

By the way, I wasn't sure earlier what this was taken with.
K-5 + DA 35mm f/2.4 at 2.4, 1/90s, ISO400
Edited by Infrabasse: 19/04/2012 - 16:16
puma
Posted 19/04/2012 - 20:57 Link
Serenely gorgeous!
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techno-terminator
Posted 19/04/2012 - 21:17 Link
Fabulous - she really is in a wee dwam savouring that pancake .

Just look at those eyes
let the education continue

proud owner of a couple of cameras and a few bits and bobs
Infrabasse
Posted 19/04/2012 - 21:23 Link
Thank you all for the kind words

Sorry for the constant edits
I decided the skin smoothing was unnecessary
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Is imageshack suddenly painfully slow for you too?
Stuey
Posted 19/04/2012 - 22:46 Link
I really like the constant inprovement shown - it should serve as a reminder to us all that most photo's can be improved with a little thought and help/ advice from others

Sooooooooooo cute - reminds me I need to make more effort to go and see my two nieces
K10D, K5 plus plenty of clueless enthusiasm.

My Flickr site link

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