My first and only Robin
Excellent shot
Roy
Pentax K3 gripped,and some lenses
https://www.flickr.com/photos/pentaxroy/
my pbase gallery
If you look at this crop you will see that it has literately no DoF and it could do with a bit of sharpening unless I am totally mistaken

Robin near Studland Village (Crop) by smutjeuk, on Flickr
SmutjeUK
It's nice to be nice!
Pentax K-5 with D-GB4 Grip, to many lenses to mention by now (serious LBA by now), TC's, Lowepro Slingshot 300 AW, Manfrotto 028 & Redsnapper RS-283 with various Heads plus various Camera Clamps (I collect them). Pentax AF 360FGZ, Pentax AF 240FT, several Metz 45 CT-1 & 5 with stands and 'Blow Up' Soft Boxes, Flash Triggers, and various Macro gear.
Roy
Pentax K3 gripped,and some lenses
https://www.flickr.com/photos/pentaxroy/
my pbase gallery
Will give the sharpening a go. Never knew that I should use a 'Unsharp Mask' (will have to hunt and find it now :lol.
Many thanks again.
SmutjeUK
It's nice to be nice!
Pentax K-5 with D-GB4 Grip, to many lenses to mention by now (serious LBA by now), TC's, Lowepro Slingshot 300 AW, Manfrotto 028 & Redsnapper RS-283 with various Heads plus various Camera Clamps (I collect them). Pentax AF 360FGZ, Pentax AF 240FT, several Metz 45 CT-1 & 5 with stands and 'Blow Up' Soft Boxes, Flash Triggers, and various Macro gear.
If there's a problem with focus / dof, sharpening can only take you so far. Programs like FocusMagic can take you a little further.
It's the kind of shot that gets accepted in the PPG, so good luck.
It looks a pretty good shot to me. I would crop to keep the robin towards the right third but leave as much as possible of the background on the left.
It's the kind of shot that gets accepted in the PPG, so good luck.
This is my suggested crop, Smutje... positions the Robin slightly to the right. so he has space to look or fly into! I haven't been able to sharpen the shot but I have tweaked the levels slightly. link
If there's a problem with focus / dof, sharpening can only take you so far. Programs like FocusMagic can take you a little further.
As for the DoF it is just clear visible in the 1:1 sot. The front feathers are sharp and clear but the head is already slightly out of focus. I could have done with an f8 or f11 on that one just to give me the extra one or two centimetres of depth.
Many thanks for all your kind replies and showing me where I can get better, I really appreciate it and it will help me in the future.
SmutjeUK
It's nice to be nice!
Pentax K-5 with D-GB4 Grip, to many lenses to mention by now (serious LBA by now), TC's, Lowepro Slingshot 300 AW, Manfrotto 028 & Redsnapper RS-283 with various Heads plus various Camera Clamps (I collect them). Pentax AF 360FGZ, Pentax AF 240FT, several Metz 45 CT-1 & 5 with stands and 'Blow Up' Soft Boxes, Flash Triggers, and various Macro gear.
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15 years
Dorset/UK
Sadly it is not 100% as I had no DoF. I came around a corner and he was sitting right in front of me. I just had the time to take a pot luck shot and for this I find it did not come out too bad.
Sadly he was gone before I could take the second shot and I got only a 'vibrating' twig where he was in the second shot.
It could do with sharpening and a crop and also I do know how to do the crop I just seem to mess the sharpening up.
I just love the texture of the feathers which is so clearly visible in the 1:1 size but I seem to mess the RAW file up when sharpening and I rather keep it as is.
Maybe someone could tell me how to best tackle the sharpening problem?
As usual C&C's are welcome.
Robin near Studland Village by smutjeuk, on Flickr
SmutjeUK
It's nice to be nice!
Pentax K-5 with D-GB4 Grip, to many lenses to mention by now (serious LBA by now), TC's, Lowepro Slingshot 300 AW, Manfrotto 028 & Redsnapper RS-283 with various Heads plus various Camera Clamps (I collect them). Pentax AF 360FGZ, Pentax AF 240FT, several Metz 45 CT-1 & 5 with stands and 'Blow Up' Soft Boxes, Flash Triggers, and various Macro gear.