More from the spottie but in colour!
Posted 10/09/2010 - 23:07
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When I said I welcome crit, I am more looking towards the photographs than spelling!
But thanks for the correction anyway
But thanks for the correction anyway
Posted 11/09/2010 - 01:09
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The last 3 don't do too much for me I'm afraid. 2 and 3 have nice sharp subjects, but slightly boring too-central composition and uninspiring backgrounds. In 4 I like the car, great reflections there, but its all a bit dark compared to the over-bright background. And as you pointed out they all tilt a bit
On the other hand I rather like the first one. Interesting slightly evil-looking statues. Nice sharp head and good DOF. Decent bokeh especially in the greens, not so much on the twiggy muddy ground. Composition seems good, even the tilt isn't too distracting If it was mine I would be tempted to clone out the 3 blue-ish bokeh discs in the top left, plus a bit of spotting on the scans - there are a few white dots here and there, plus a few scratches in the negs.
On the other hand I rather like the first one. Interesting slightly evil-looking statues. Nice sharp head and good DOF. Decent bokeh especially in the greens, not so much on the twiggy muddy ground. Composition seems good, even the tilt isn't too distracting If it was mine I would be tempted to clone out the 3 blue-ish bokeh discs in the top left, plus a bit of spotting on the scans - there are a few white dots here and there, plus a few scratches in the negs.
Tim
AF - Pentax K5, Sigma 10-20/4-5.6, Tamron 17-50/2.8, Sigma 30/1.4, Sigma 70-200/2.8, Tamron 70-300/4-5.6
MF - Vivitar CF 28/2.8, Tamron AD2 90/2.5, MTO 1000/11
Stuff - Metz 58 AF1, Cactus v4, Nikon SB24, Raynox 150, Sigma 1.4x TC, Sigma 2x TC, Kenko 2x macro TC, Redsnapper 283 tripod, iMac 27”, Macbook Pro 17”, iPad, iPhone 3G
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MF - Vivitar CF 28/2.8, Tamron AD2 90/2.5, MTO 1000/11
Stuff - Metz 58 AF1, Cactus v4, Nikon SB24, Raynox 150, Sigma 1.4x TC, Sigma 2x TC, Kenko 2x macro TC, Redsnapper 283 tripod, iMac 27”, Macbook Pro 17”, iPad, iPhone 3G
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Posted 11/09/2010 - 22:23
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Thanks for the crit, they are all a little bit 'thoughtless snaps' I was basically running a colour film to check the camera was all ok. They are straight scans and I agree a bit of PP would help them a bit (straightening and cleaning the negs would be a good start).
Posted 12/09/2010 - 00:24
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No probs. You can return the favour one day soon
After seeing the bokeh in the mud in image 1 I was going to ask what lens this was but forgot to. Then I re-read your first post - a 50 f1.4? Didn't you just buy a broken one of those from me?
After seeing the bokeh in the mud in image 1 I was going to ask what lens this was but forgot to. Then I re-read your first post - a 50 f1.4? Didn't you just buy a broken one of those from me?
Tim
AF - Pentax K5, Sigma 10-20/4-5.6, Tamron 17-50/2.8, Sigma 30/1.4, Sigma 70-200/2.8, Tamron 70-300/4-5.6
MF - Vivitar CF 28/2.8, Tamron AD2 90/2.5, MTO 1000/11
Stuff - Metz 58 AF1, Cactus v4, Nikon SB24, Raynox 150, Sigma 1.4x TC, Sigma 2x TC, Kenko 2x macro TC, Redsnapper 283 tripod, iMac 27”, Macbook Pro 17”, iPad, iPhone 3G
Flickr • Fluidr • PPG • Street • Portfolio site
Feel free to edit any of my posted photos! If I post a photo for critique, I want brutal honesty. If you don't like it, please say so and tell me why!
AF - Pentax K5, Sigma 10-20/4-5.6, Tamron 17-50/2.8, Sigma 30/1.4, Sigma 70-200/2.8, Tamron 70-300/4-5.6
MF - Vivitar CF 28/2.8, Tamron AD2 90/2.5, MTO 1000/11
Stuff - Metz 58 AF1, Cactus v4, Nikon SB24, Raynox 150, Sigma 1.4x TC, Sigma 2x TC, Kenko 2x macro TC, Redsnapper 283 tripod, iMac 27”, Macbook Pro 17”, iPad, iPhone 3G
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Posted 12/09/2010 - 11:33
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Yeah... I'll have 4 of them when they all arrive, lovely lense IMHO, the first manual focus I bought for my canon 20D. I bought one from my local LCE same as yours super takumar, then bought a spotmatic F to play with it on the 'proper' camera it was intended for, realised what a bonus open aperture metering was so bought another with a spotmatic ESII attached, needed some parts to fix the ESII so bought a 'spares/repair' Spotty F which happened to have another SMC version in it. then yours popped up for sale while I was fixing sticky blades on a 35mm f3.5 super tak so I though, why not buy and fix another one I'll keep 2 and sell 2 to fund my need for a SMC takumar 28mm f3.5
I think I may have a spare working spot F so one will go for sale with that.
I have squirrel/magpie tendancies
I think I may have a spare working spot F so one will go for sale with that.
I have squirrel/magpie tendancies
Posted 12/09/2010 - 19:17
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Heh sounds like quite a plan! If I had any confidence in my repair skills I'd try myself. I hope you have a spare set of blades for the one I'm sending you, cause the ones that are in there are a a bit of a mess!
Tim
AF - Pentax K5, Sigma 10-20/4-5.6, Tamron 17-50/2.8, Sigma 30/1.4, Sigma 70-200/2.8, Tamron 70-300/4-5.6
MF - Vivitar CF 28/2.8, Tamron AD2 90/2.5, MTO 1000/11
Stuff - Metz 58 AF1, Cactus v4, Nikon SB24, Raynox 150, Sigma 1.4x TC, Sigma 2x TC, Kenko 2x macro TC, Redsnapper 283 tripod, iMac 27”, Macbook Pro 17”, iPad, iPhone 3G
Flickr • Fluidr • PPG • Street • Portfolio site
Feel free to edit any of my posted photos! If I post a photo for critique, I want brutal honesty. If you don't like it, please say so and tell me why!
AF - Pentax K5, Sigma 10-20/4-5.6, Tamron 17-50/2.8, Sigma 30/1.4, Sigma 70-200/2.8, Tamron 70-300/4-5.6
MF - Vivitar CF 28/2.8, Tamron AD2 90/2.5, MTO 1000/11
Stuff - Metz 58 AF1, Cactus v4, Nikon SB24, Raynox 150, Sigma 1.4x TC, Sigma 2x TC, Kenko 2x macro TC, Redsnapper 283 tripod, iMac 27”, Macbook Pro 17”, iPad, iPhone 3G
Flickr • Fluidr • PPG • Street • Portfolio site
Feel free to edit any of my posted photos! If I post a photo for critique, I want brutal honesty. If you don't like it, please say so and tell me why!
Posted 12/09/2010 - 22:03
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Nope, no spare blades, I'll see if those are repairable or try and find a cheaper donor lens for some. If not I may try and do something creative with it like a tilt shift conversion.
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Anyway these came out pretty well IMHO, Comment and crit is always welcome I've a lot to learn with this film lark (like how to hold a camera straight)!!
The wolves again but a slight different angle, probably 50mm f1.4 at a guess
Fountain with a fast shutter, colour came out well IMHO.
Bronze statue of Alan Turin (I know these are a bit similar to my previous pics but its just what is on site)
Tasty e-Type parked up in town, need to learn how to gauge the light meter for this link of thing. going out to play with the ESII next.
All taken on my Spot F with Kodak ultramax 400, probably 50mm f1.4 and the jag 35mm f3.5.