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Posted 06/11/2012 - 19:58 - Helpful Comment
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Nice portrait and nice pose. The top right hand corner is distracting is it a corner of the room???
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Posted 06/11/2012 - 20:19 - Helpful Comment
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Unlucky crop.
The top right corner shows what I expect to either be the corner of a room, or the edge of a backdrop.
The reflection in the eyes shows the photographer.
For my taste, to much retouching have also been done.
I don't really find that the photo does her justice.
Personally, if it was my daughter, I would have slapped the photographer, and asked him to redo it
The top right corner shows what I expect to either be the corner of a room, or the edge of a backdrop.
The reflection in the eyes shows the photographer.
For my taste, to much retouching have also been done.
I don't really find that the photo does her justice.
Personally, if it was my daughter, I would have slapped the photographer, and asked him to redo it
Posted 06/11/2012 - 20:34
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SnoozeMoose wrote:
Unlucky crop.
The top right corner shows what I expect to either be the corner of a room, or the edge of a backdrop.
The reflection in the eyes shows the photographer.
For my taste, to much retouching have also been done.
I don't really find that the photo does her justice.
Personally, if it was my daughter, I would have slapped the photographer, and asked him to redo it
i agree 100% i must say its NOT one of my shots but the photographer did use a pentax
Unlucky crop.
The top right corner shows what I expect to either be the corner of a room, or the edge of a backdrop.
The reflection in the eyes shows the photographer.
For my taste, to much retouching have also been done.
I don't really find that the photo does her justice.
Personally, if it was my daughter, I would have slapped the photographer, and asked him to redo it
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Posted 06/11/2012 - 20:45 - Helpful Comment
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What a lovely face, you can be proud of her.
Basically it's a good portrait, I like the lighting, the eye-contact and the reflection of you in her eyes. But the part of her right hand is distracting a bit for me. I could imagine a tighter crop that could emphasize her beauty face.
Basically it's a good portrait, I like the lighting, the eye-contact and the reflection of you in her eyes. But the part of her right hand is distracting a bit for me. I could imagine a tighter crop that could emphasize her beauty face.
Posted 06/11/2012 - 20:56
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puma wrote:
I must say iam very proud of her; she has said that she would like me to photograph her now.
Knowing your studio shots I can only agree with her!
I must say iam very proud of her; she has said that she would like me to photograph her now.
Posted 06/11/2012 - 20:57 - Helpful Comment
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I don't want to put my foot in it Shaun, as I don't know who took the shots, but I do think you could have done it better. It's a bit full on and contrasty for my taste in portraits, but your daughter looks great and I'm sure she has a future in this.
Regards
David
Regards
David
Posted 06/11/2012 - 21:53 - Helpful Comment
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I can see why you are proud of her Shaun she appears to be very photogenic
I expect we will be seeing her in some of your shots very soon Shaun - 'Dad filter' applied of course
The shot above looks pretty good to me though
I expect we will be seeing her in some of your shots very soon Shaun - 'Dad filter' applied of course
The shot above looks pretty good to me though
Posted 08/11/2012 - 08:24
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SnoozeMoose wrote:
Unlucky crop.
The top right corner shows what I expect to either be the corner of a room, or the edge of a backdrop.
The reflection in the eyes shows the photographer.
For my taste, to much retouching have also been done.
I don't really find that the photo does her justice.
Personally, if it was my daughter, I would have slapped the photographer, and asked him to redo it
thats a bit over the top Dodge i mean SnoozeMoose
Unlucky crop.
The top right corner shows what I expect to either be the corner of a room, or the edge of a backdrop.
The reflection in the eyes shows the photographer.
For my taste, to much retouching have also been done.
I don't really find that the photo does her justice.
Personally, if it was my daughter, I would have slapped the photographer, and asked him to redo it
Thanks Richard
Posted 08/11/2012 - 08:46
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So no more landscapes, I take it Shaun...
Best wishes,
Andrew
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Andrew
"These places mean something and it's the job of a photographer to figure-out what the hell it is."
Robert Adams
"The camera doesn't make a bit of difference. All of them can record what you are seeing. But, you have to SEE."
Ernst Hass
My website: http://www.ephotozine.com/user/bwlchmawr-199050
http://s927.photobucket.com/home/ADC3440/index
https://www.flickr.com/photos/78898196@N05
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Iam a bit unhappy with her doing this but who iam to say no now lol just a dad