Lil' Dude

paulyrichard
Posted 18/05/2009 - 09:13 Link
Lil' Dude

[IMG]http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j159/paulyrichard/harveygoldtonedBWbordered559-1.jpg[/IMG]
"All the technique in the world doesn’t compensate for the inability to notice." - Elliott Erwitt

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Edited by paulyrichard: 18/05/2009 - 09:51
aminstar
Posted 18/05/2009 - 10:37 Link
Paul, this is an amazing one, his eyes locked onto something that has attracted his attention make this really a cracking shot
he is a cutie
RR
Posted 18/05/2009 - 11:15 Link
There's a little too much contrast in this one for me Paul. It must have been a deliberate step by you as we've all seen great mono conversions from you, but I fear you've overcooked it very slightly.
I can barely differentiate the Iris' from the pupils which is a little off putting, as is the stark contrast in the background, maybe ease off a touch to get those rich tones you are already adept at.

Bob
paulyrichard
Posted 18/05/2009 - 11:43 Link
Thanks guys.

Rob, the high key effect was deliberate.
Your right about the eyes in this shot, I was conscious of that. Maybe when I get some better software i'll be able to use some 'dodging' on those eyes.
"All the technique in the world doesn’t compensate for the inability to notice." - Elliott Erwitt

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RR
Posted 18/05/2009 - 11:58 Link
Paul, can you try it using layers ?

Make a lighter conversion for the eyes then place this conversion over the top & use an eraser to delete the eyes, revealing the conversion on the layer below. Obviously the software will need layers functionality and a variable opacity eraser to soften the blended areas.

Just a thought..
MattMatic
Posted 18/05/2009 - 12:05 Link
Even if you have Photoshop Elements you can do it like this:

1. Add a new blank layer
2. Change the layer blend mode from Normal to "Soft Light"
3. Pick a soft white brush, opacity around 10%
4. Paint on the new layer - painting white will lighten, painting black will darken.

Easy-peasy And you can click the layer visibility to check the before/after.

Matt
http://www.mattmatic.co.uk
(For gallery, tips and links)
RR
Posted 18/05/2009 - 12:09 Link
[IMG]http://i134.photobucket.com/albums/q105/RR76/harveygoldtonedBWbordered559dodged.jpg[/IMG]

I hope you don't mind Paul, if so I'll take it down straight away.

The background seems less distracting now the portrait has a natural draw to the eyes.
Edited by RR: 18/05/2009 - 12:10
paulyrichard
Posted 18/05/2009 - 12:31 Link
No worries Rob.

I like what you've done. Nice one.

Thanks Matt.
"All the technique in the world doesn’t compensate for the inability to notice." - Elliott Erwitt

http://paulyrichard.wordpress.com/
paulyrichard
Posted 21/05/2009 - 13:41 Link
Here is my version. I've kept it a straight mono image. I 'dodged' the eyes in reference to Matt and Rob's post.

[IMG]http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j159/paulyrichard/HarveydodgedeyescroppedclonedBWb-2.jpg[/IMG]
"All the technique in the world doesn’t compensate for the inability to notice." - Elliott Erwitt

http://paulyrichard.wordpress.com/
Posted 21/05/2009 - 20:45 Link
A quality pic Pauly
RR
Posted 21/05/2009 - 21:02 Link
Makes a world of difference I think.

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