Lemon-scented gums

i-Berg
Posted 23/05/2010 - 06:34 Link
Any thoughts on these please? Do they 'work'?

[IMG]http://i772.photobucket.com/albums/yy9/i_berg/Pentax%20User%20Forum%20Images/_IGP0749R.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i772.photobucket.com/albums/yy9/i_berg/Pentax%20User%20Forum%20Images/_IGP0808R.jpg[/IMG]

relief - tree-trunk, e. citrodora
[IMG]http://i772.photobucket.com/albums/yy9/i_berg/Pentax%20User%20Forum%20Images/_IGP0814R.jpg[/IMG]

Thoughts and comments welcome.
Edited by i-Berg: 23/05/2010 - 06:51
bwlchmawr
Posted 23/05/2010 - 06:45 Link
What amazing smooth white bark against that sky.
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rodrigues
Posted 23/05/2010 - 07:11 Link
Hello,




You took great shot man. this look sreally very good. i like this photo. what camera do you used.


thanks!!


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i-Berg
Posted 23/05/2010 - 11:11 Link
Thanks Rodrigues - the camera is a K10D, and the lens a Pentax FA50 f1.4.
i-Berg
Posted 23/05/2010 - 11:14 Link
bwichmawr wrote:
What amazing smooth white bark against that sky.
Andrew,

These are very pleasant trees in every respect bar one - they shed large limbs without warning. It's a habit they share with other eucalypts.
Thus, they tend to be better in parks, and not around houses.
Edited by i-Berg: 23/05/2010 - 11:15
aliengrove
Posted 23/05/2010 - 17:46 Link
The second one works very well I think, as the focus on the darker bits around the lump draws the eye in to that gnarly lump. The softer focus further up the tree looks very nice against the sky, and empasises the shape of the tree.

The first one unfortunately has a bit much shadow around the most intersting bit and the white looks a little blown out in places?
The last one is a bit difficult to tell if it's rock, tree or something else, and it doesn't really do much for me as purely an abstract.

The sky is amazing in both the first two shots, and contrasts very nicely with the white of the tree.
i-Berg
Posted 24/05/2010 - 06:54 Link
Thanks A-G - on reflection that focus would have been better on the coloured stump part, in the 1st.

I will have a think about the abstract one - I want that to be better than what it is. The more I look at it now, the less I like it...

Thanks for looking.
darlene
Posted 28/05/2010 - 02:20 Link
#1 like the tree limbs reaching for the big blue sky...
i-Berg
Posted 28/05/2010 - 08:05 Link
Thanks Darlene
thoughton
Posted 28/05/2010 - 09:44 Link
Lovely colours, and good control of the highlights in the trunk. I think in number 1 there is too much OOF foreground, and like you say it's a pity that the stump isn't in focus. I like number 2!

Looking at number 3 I'm struck by the little holes in the trunk and thinking about the fortnightly comp. Surely there is a face hiding in this tree somewhere?
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i-Berg
Posted 28/05/2010 - 10:28 Link
Indeed there is (to my eye anyway Tim) - top RH corner of the shadow area.

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