Hoverfly plus A.N.Other
Posted 16/07/2011 - 22:48
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#1: A few quite large parts of the image look blown out (although I've not checked to see if this is really the case).
#2: Eyes don't quite seem in focus (the focus point seems to be on the body somewhere).
#3: Struggling to find the area of focus. Composition is a little static (horizontal flying thing is probably why).
#4: Now we're talking, although it still looks a little static.
#5: My favourite by a mile. Real sense of movement. Would be better if focus point was slightly more towards eyes.
To be fair, all five images are better than anything I have to show , so well done!
EM
#2: Eyes don't quite seem in focus (the focus point seems to be on the body somewhere).
#3: Struggling to find the area of focus. Composition is a little static (horizontal flying thing is probably why).
#4: Now we're talking, although it still looks a little static.
#5: My favourite by a mile. Real sense of movement. Would be better if focus point was slightly more towards eyes.
To be fair, all five images are better than anything I have to show , so well done!
EM
Posted 17/07/2011 - 09:32
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5 for me as well.... love the colours
Half Man... Half Pentax ... Half Cucumber
Pentax K-1 + K-5 and some other stuff
Algi
Pentax K-1 + K-5 and some other stuff
Algi
Posted 17/07/2011 - 13:35
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Thanks, everyone.
The standard of critique here has, to my mind, never been in question!
Roger.
The standard of critique here has, to my mind, never been in question!
Roger.
The more I look, the more there is to see!
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Following three: on-board flash
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Constructive criticism (& any other comments) most welcome. Don't hold back!
Roger.