Hoverfly plus A.N.Other

coker
Posted 16/07/2011 - 21:57 Link
All K7, !00mm DFA Macro, ISO200, hand-held.

Comment Image
[IMG]http://i1021.photobucket.com/albums/af340/rogerhlane/SatMac001crop.jpg[/IMG]


Comment Image
[IMG]http://i1021.photobucket.com/albums/af340/rogerhlane/Satmacro019crop.jpg[/IMG]

Following three: on-board flash


Comment Image
[IMG]http://i1021.photobucket.com/albums/af340/rogerhlane/SatMacII026crop_filtered.jpg[/IMG]


Comment Image
[IMG]http://i1021.photobucket.com/albums/af340/rogerhlane/SatMacII025crop_filtered.jpg[/IMG]


Comment Image
[IMG]http://i1021.photobucket.com/albums/af340/rogerhlane/SatMacII024crop_filtered.jpg[/IMG]


Constructive criticism (& any other comments) most welcome. Don't hold back!


Roger.
The more I look, the more there is to see!
Edited by coker: 16/07/2011 - 21:59
fatspider
Posted 16/07/2011 - 21:58 Link
Quote:
"LOVELY, GREAT, BEAUTIFUL, STUNNING
My Names Alan, and I'm a lensaholic.
My PPG link
My Flckr link
Epithet Man
Posted 16/07/2011 - 22:48 Link
#1: A few quite large parts of the image look blown out (although I've not checked to see if this is really the case).

#2: Eyes don't quite seem in focus (the focus point seems to be on the body somewhere).

#3: Struggling to find the area of focus. Composition is a little static (horizontal flying thing is probably why).

#4: Now we're talking, although it still looks a little static.

#5: My favourite by a mile. Real sense of movement. Would be better if focus point was slightly more towards eyes.

To be fair, all five images are better than anything I have to show , so well done!

EM
SteveEveritt
Posted 17/07/2011 - 09:15 Link
Number 5 is a great shot the angle of the subject is what makes it.
Flickr
"Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans" (John Lennon)
Algernon
Posted 17/07/2011 - 09:32 Link
5 for me as well.... love the colours
Half Man... Half Pentax ... Half Cucumber

Pentax K-1 + K-5 and some other stuff

Algi
Blythman
Posted 17/07/2011 - 10:22 Link
Pretty much agree with other comments. #1 and #2, the focus is seems off. On the remaining 3 the technique is spot on, And it all comes together in #5 where there is some modelling with the subject being on an angle, and a good view of the wings.
Alan


PPG
Flickr
coker
Posted 17/07/2011 - 13:35 Link
Thanks, everyone.
The standard of critique here has, to my mind, never been in question!

Roger.
The more I look, the more there is to see!

Add Comment

To leave a comment - Log in to Pentax User or create a new account.



Proudly supporting Pentax User

Samsung Logo Asahi Pentax Logo