Higgar Tor

SteveT
Posted 26/12/2011 - 17:35 Link
Second shot I have managed to salvage from a flat light walk today (Boxing Day)


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NaimKhan
Posted 26/12/2011 - 23:44 Link
Steve, do you think you could try with cropping out the half stone at the bottom of the frame and then see how it looks?
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SteveT
Posted 27/12/2011 - 14:50 Link
Kind of like this?

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puma
Posted 27/12/2011 - 15:03 Link
Great shot made up you salvage it.
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NaimKhan
Posted 27/12/2011 - 15:08 Link
Yes - much better.
SteveT
Posted 29/12/2011 - 14:58 Link
trying to make the best of a bad job maybe, but wondered what you think with some selective dodge and burn?

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ChrisA
Posted 29/12/2011 - 17:59 Link
It's not going to win any awards whatever you do to it, but I quite like the original. I like the pastel colours, and I like the sense of depth and distance.

My personal view, FWIW, is that neither the faked light (which just looks messy to me) nor squarer crop do it any favours.

You might bring up the shadow in the middle distance just a smidge (not enough to make it like the brighter foreground - just enough to see a little more of the detail).

Apart from that, why try to turn it into something that it's not? It's a pleasant record shot, of a nice view on a clear day. I think the rocks lead the eye nicely into the picture, and with a little more detail visible in the middle distance, you'd be good to go.

The only other thing is that the hill line is starting to halo a little, so go easy on the sharpening.
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Edited by ChrisA: 29/12/2011 - 18:02
SteveT
Posted 29/12/2011 - 18:13 Link
Thanks for taking the time to look and comment.
I take your point about the dodged highlights something i wanted to try though.
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