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ems82
Posted 25/03/2010 - 07:09 Link
I took this shot last year in Loch Lomond. I have been trying to play in elements but can not seem to get it right any hints or tips? Thankyou
[IMG]http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/ems82_photos/LochLomondcopy_edited-1.jpg[/IMG]
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ems82
Posted 25/03/2010 - 07:14 Link
Heres another I having trouble with. Any help greatly apprieciated.
[IMG]http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/ems82_photos/mainentrance_edited-1.jpg[/IMG]
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i-Berg
Posted 25/03/2010 - 09:05 Link
Hi Emma,

What is it that is frustrating you / what are you attempting that is not yet working for you?

Is it something you are seeing in the image, or is it the functionality of PSE itself (or both?).
ems82
Posted 25/03/2010 - 09:18 Link
Hello i-berg They just seem to be jumping out they seem too flat. Ive been fiddling for ages
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bwlchmawr
Posted 25/03/2010 - 09:18 Link
Emma these look fine to me. I might try selecting the top half of the ruiver scene - just above the bridge and increasing contrast.

A.
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ems82
Posted 25/03/2010 - 09:18 Link
I like them but dont love them if you no what i mean
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Glover
Posted 25/03/2010 - 09:32 Link
hopw you dont mind i had a quick play, i thought the building to the right was a little too much hidden and wanted to make it more visible, also the 2 tree's that are more of a centre point i've brought out a bit more too, selective levels adjust, some dodge and burn and some selective contrast adjust, only done quickly but i think i quite like it,

What do you think?
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fatspider
Posted 25/03/2010 - 09:39 Link
I agree, It depends on what your trying to achieve.
It would help to know what method your using to do the B&W coversion.

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I like them but dont love them if you no what i mean
I suppose we all have shots like that, something we keep going back to time and again but we can never get it to push the right buttons, try putting them to one side for a while, then come back to them when your photoshop skills have increased.
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Glover
Posted 25/03/2010 - 09:57 Link
Not so sure about this one, what do you think?
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gartmore
Posted 25/03/2010 - 10:50 Link
This is tricky, in the second you have overexposed, the dark walls have tricked the camera's meter causing the highlights to be burnt out and there is nothing you can do about that sadly.

You can get a bit more punch by teaking levels as shown below, I then dodged the wall on the right and burnt in the highlights a little.

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As Impotentspider says it would be useful to know what you have already done, I'd like to see the original.
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i-Berg
Posted 25/03/2010 - 10:53 Link
Emma,

What I see is that both of these images have strong elements that make for great shots.

I suspect that the thing that could be causing you grief, is that they both have "High Dynamic Range" (HDR) features too - areas of significant shadow, as well as blown or nearly blown highlights.

Witness the arch at the top of the stairs (overexposed) versus the areas closer to the camera, in the second image.

That is difficult for the camera to handle with a single exposure. If applying global adjustments to the image, then as soon as you compensate for one, you make the other worse.

Is that starting to sound like what's happening?

If the image has sufficient remaining detail in both highlights and shadows, you could try selective adjustments to specific areas, with masks. Alternatively, make copies of the image, and adjust each for the differences (doge and burn), then superimpose them and use masks again.

Alternatively, give up on the shadows - accept them as blocked up, black areas (that works in the right shots), and fix the highlights?

Someone more talented will no doubt have far better advice for you Emma - I've been banging on long enough! :arrow:
i-Berg
Posted 25/03/2010 - 10:55 Link
Apologies Ken - I think our posts crossed in the mail!
CoDa
Posted 25/03/2010 - 14:50 Link
Here's my attempt, selective cloning, selective levels adjustment, selective highlights etc adjustments.

[IMG]http://i941.photobucket.com/albums/ad254/weldingblues/Modified%20forum%20shots/Ems82-Mainentrace-edited.jpg[/IMG]

What do you think?
BR
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ems82
Posted 25/03/2010 - 19:14 Link
Well here are the 2 originals Thanks for having a go guys Colin and Glover i like your conversion of the stairs Ken yours seems to be a bit too grey if you no what I mean.
[IMG]http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/ems82_photos/20080104_23.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i590.photobucket.com/albums/ss344/ems82_photos/SG102056.jpg[/IMG]
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CoDa
Posted 25/03/2010 - 21:25 Link
Hi Emma,
Something like this?

[IMG]http://i941.photobucket.com/albums/ad254/weldingblues/Modified%20forum%20shots/Ems82-Mainentrace-edited2.jpg[/IMG]

Regards
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