Help! Is this portrait that good?

cabstar
Posted 14/11/2013 - 18:25 Link
I like it and given the location and subject I think not portrays the subject perfectly. I also like it's not a set up and literally shot live which is difficult when not working with models. I would like to see the full size version.
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bwlchmawr
Posted 14/11/2013 - 19:41 Link
Thanks for providing the link, Gwyn. The other prize winners are all, to my mind, much stronger and more memorable, particularly the two "twin" shots. Still, judging photographs is mostly about personal taste, assuming the technical aspects are up to scratch.
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mille19
Posted 14/11/2013 - 20:22 Link
Fantastic expression and mood but I too don't like the dead space above, looks like it's been taken for the front of a magazine and space has been left for text.
fatspider
Posted 14/11/2013 - 20:39 Link
Works OK for me! and I do think it needs the space, it gives a feeling of isolation and the split background offers a feeling of depth, I did try cropping but didn't like it probably due to the face on viewpoint, don't think it's worth a £12,000 prize though, I'd be happy to get £12 for some of mine
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johnha
Posted 14/11/2013 - 20:44 Link
I quite like it. BJP put this on their Nov cover and mentioned in their editorial that the competition had become a parody of itself (each year submissions were broadly similar in concept to the previous winner...). They also printed some of the other entries.
Algernon
Posted 14/11/2013 - 20:47 Link
Very poor. The tog didn't even have to bother establishing raport.
Non of the others were up to much either.

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1stEverPentax
Posted 14/11/2013 - 21:02 Link
It's ok but nothing special. reminds me of the pictures that get taken in those passport booths...you know the ones...no smiling or open mouths, look straight ahead at the camera and move the seat up or down to ensure your head fits in the rectangle...£5 for 5 pics but you only get 3 chances to get the right pose.

£12,000 though? Nice work if you can get it.
Gwyn
Posted 14/11/2013 - 21:45 Link
Are you looking at the same photo as me????

The space suggest the isolation of the woman working in a man's world. Her face shows so much emotion, exhaustion, pride. I love the fact that it reminds one of a Victorian portrait, whilst showing a very 21st century woman.

1stEverPentax wrote:
It's ok but nothing special. reminds me of the pictures that get taken in those passport booths...


You must have a better class of passport photo than most people.
Posted 14/11/2013 - 21:49 Link
Hear Hear!
Gwyn wrote:
Are you looking at the same photo as me????

The space suggest the isolation of the woman working in a man's world. Her face shows so much emotion, exhaustion, pride. I love the fact that it reminds one of a Victorian portrait, whilst showing a very 21st century woman.

1stEverPentax wrote:
It's ok but nothing special. reminds me of the pictures that get taken in those passport booths...


You must have a better class of passport photo than most people.
1stEverPentax
Posted 14/11/2013 - 22:29 Link
Gwyn wrote:
Are you looking at the same photo as me????

The space suggest the isolation of the woman working in a man's world. Her face shows so much emotion, exhaustion, pride. I love the fact that it reminds one of a Victorian portrait, whilst showing a very 21st century woman.

1stEverPentax wrote:
It's ok but nothing special. reminds me of the pictures that get taken in those passport booths...


You must have a better class of passport photo than most people.
Not sure the DVLA would concur!
nass
Posted 15/11/2013 - 00:02 Link
The look, dirty clothes and emotion are all memorable, but really considering it's a portrait I think it could have been posed better. That two colour background is a bit sloppy I think.
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Pentaxophile
Posted 15/11/2013 - 00:35 Link
The direct approach here works for me. I love it. It's the essence of what a portrait should be. Stripped of artifice and very direct.
cabstar
Posted 15/11/2013 - 00:37 Link
Having looked at it again I like it even more. Has anyone tried photographing a woman looking dishevelled like this. I think it would take some convincing.
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nass
Posted 15/11/2013 - 09:45 Link
cabstar wrote:
Having looked at it again I like it even more. Has anyone tried photographing a woman looking dishevelled like this. I think it would take some convincing.
heh, that's not such a bad point
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Algernon
Posted 15/11/2013 - 10:11 Link
She's a jockey..... all jockeys look the same

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