Giraffe!
Posted 03/02/2011 - 09:58
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Some lovely shots here. Cute little (a young one I assume) critter. I especially like the first one and Testing the Water. I was also surprised byt he amount of PF in the 2nd shot. Luckily there isn't much else purple in the photo so it should be easy to get rid of.
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the Giraffes - very endearing and gentle seeming creatures.
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the Giraffes - very endearing and gentle seeming creatures.
Tim
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Posted 03/02/2011 - 11:12
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A fine set Matt, no 1 is a very good shot and excellent PP, you seem to have added a warm tone to the mono which suites the subject perfectly. Great framing, if only you could get rid of the distracting downpipe in the background, I think it would be up there with the best.
Testing the water also very good, I think the great touch is getting the head in profile again and the juxtaposition of the organic against the industrial feel of the door. Again I would like to see the slight distraction of the bottom of the window disappear.
Testing the water also very good, I think the great touch is getting the head in profile again and the juxtaposition of the organic against the industrial feel of the door. Again I would like to see the slight distraction of the bottom of the window disappear.
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Posted 03/02/2011 - 18:09
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Thanks for the C&C folks - definitely helpful and I shall have a go at a few tweaks I think. The shot with purple fringing was indeed wide open at f2.8. I had been shooting inside the giraffe house and it was pretty dark (the first shot is f2.8 and ISO 800 but still only had 1/60th shutter speed). I think I just snapped the second shot (it's a different giraffe) as an opportune image using the same settings. I think it can be fixed in PS though (I'll have a go). Will definitely have a go with curves on the last shot, and I'll have a go at tidying up a few bits and bobs, although I don't know if I'll satisfactorily get rid of the vertical object in the first shot (it is the locking mechanism of the big giraffe house doors - like a giant fire escape mechanism I think). I shall have to nip back sometime and see if I can find the giraffe sitting a couple of feet to the right or left
Thanks for the link Tim too!
Cheers
Thanks for the link Tim too!
Cheers
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First up, a portrait taken inside the Giraffe house:
Big wide world?:
Peeping outside:
Testing the water:
Raspberry!:
and finally,a parting portrait in the doorway (bit of a crop this one):
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