ForgottenRose

tyronet2000
Posted 12/12/2011 - 13:25 Link
Using TopazAdjust5 in PS5

Think its a bit overcooked ?

C & C's please


[IMG]http://i1100.photobucket.com/albums/g406/tyronet2000/ForgottenRose.jpg[/IMG]
Regards
Stan

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Frogherder
Posted 12/12/2011 - 13:41 - Helpful Comment Link
Hi Stan, to my eyes the centre/right of the rose could do with brightening a bit, but I would leave the glass as is.

I'm afraid I'm not at all proficient with PS (my copy is PS7) and I've never used Topaz. However Pentaxophile walked me through a sequence in PS which helped me (https://www.pentaxuser.com/forum/topic/today-in-the-sun-30756/p-0)

regards
Bernard
tyronet2000
Posted 12/12/2011 - 14:11 Link
Thanks Bernard, I'll try and brighten it up although I'm still getting to grips with the essential tools (levels masks etc) in PS. I usually finish up with something from a kiddies colouring book
Regards
Stan

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tyronet2000
Posted 12/12/2011 - 14:41 Link
Frogherder wrote:
Hi Stan, to my eyes the centre/right of the rose could do with brightening a bit, but I would leave the glass as is.

I'm afraid I'm not at all proficient with PS (my copy is PS7) and I've never used Topaz. However Pentaxophile walked me through a sequence in PS which helped me (https://www.pentaxuser.com/forum/topic/today-in-the-sun-30756/p-0)

regards
Bernard
An attempt to brighten center/right side. Thinks it's "start again"

[IMG]http://i1100.photobucket.com/albums/g406/tyronet2000/Forgotten_Rose.jpg[/IMG]
Regards
Stan

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Frogherder
Posted 12/12/2011 - 15:12 Link
Maybe send a PM to Pentaxophile, I'm sure he'll respond well - He's from the midlands (we have to be nice to people here being tucked in between the northerners and the southerners:wink

Bernard
Pentaxophile
Posted 12/12/2011 - 17:26 - Helpful Comment Link
The second version looks OK, but is the rose a two-toned flower? The inside of the petals looks red, and the outside yellow... the transition between the two colours looks a bit posterised... especially in the second version. Maybe raise the lightness without raising the saturation (somehow)!
tyronet2000
Posted 12/12/2011 - 17:51 Link
Pentaxophile wrote:
The second version looks OK, but is the rose a two-toned flower? The inside of the petals looks red, and the outside yellow... the transition between the two colours looks a bit posterised... especially in the second version. Maybe raise the lightness without raising the saturation (somehow)!
This is from the camera before I ruined it
It had better colours 3 days before it started to die and I took photos then completely marmalized it.

[IMG]http://i1100.photobucket.com/albums/g406/tyronet2000/untitled-0018.jpg[/IMG]
Regards
Stan

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Pentaxophile
Posted 12/12/2011 - 18:15 - Helpful Comment Link
Wow you totally changed it! I like what you did with the background, but perhaps it was a bit strong for the petals.

Try working on the blue background first - go to hue/saturation, select 'blue' and pull down the brightness slider.

You can also use the magic wand selection tool to select the blue background and darken it.

Do the above on a new (duplicate) layer and when the background is dark enough, you can erase parts of the flower which have become too dark using the eraser brush tool (use a soft edge to the brush and a fairly big brush diameter). As you erase, the original image underneath will come through.
Edited by Pentaxophile: 12/12/2011 - 18:17
tyronet2000
Posted 12/12/2011 - 18:31 Link
Thanks for the comments and help Will. I must do something about the creases in the background cloth too. I did suggest the Financial Controller could run over them with the iRon but she said something nasty Just wait till she wants a cd ripped for her iPod
Regards
Stan

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