Evening on the river

nipper
Posted 18/09/2011 - 00:07 Link
Not used my camera much lately , had a stroll this evening and tried some shots i'm still very much learning especially landscapes which i find difficult, so any comments appreciated .

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George Lazarette
Posted 18/09/2011 - 00:43 Link
I am not keen on over-saturated colours, but these seem under-saturated to me. Is that deliberate, or does your monitor need calibrating?

G
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Pentaxophile
Posted 18/09/2011 - 01:00 Link
These and your previous sets remind me of my time on the Avon. I like no. 3 and 5 quite a bit. Nice clarity and evening light. Saturation looks OK to me, they look quite cool but I don't mind that. Nice to see a bit of industry included. Especially as the rising steam looks so good backlit.
Opethian
Posted 18/09/2011 - 01:31 Link
At first look, they don't wow you, but on further inspection, these are quite good! Some of them (particularly 3 to look like their a bit HDR!

Good job, thanks for sharing!
Edited by Opethian: 18/09/2011 - 01:32
nipper
Posted 18/09/2011 - 01:31 Link
George Lazarette wrote:
I am not keen on over-saturated colours, but these seem under-saturated to me. Is that deliberate, or does your monitor need calibrating?

G
his this better :

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nipper
Posted 18/09/2011 - 01:37 Link
Opethian wrote:
At first look, they don't wow you, but on further inspection, these are quite good! Some of them (particularly 3 to look like their a bit HDR!

Good job, thanks for sharing!
LOL Omly took about 3000 photos with dslr so i don;t think i will be wowing just yet and i don;t know why it says pentax master under my name just taking photos at the moment but do find landscapes and the processing of them a bit difficult, might stick to wildlife
Edited by nipper: 18/09/2011 - 01:47
Pentaxophile
Posted 18/09/2011 - 09:48 Link
No need to be modest nipper. Your pictures have been great, right off the bat.
nipper
Posted 18/09/2011 - 10:43 Link
Pentaxophile wrote:
No need to be modest nipper. Your pictures have been great, right off the bat.
thanks , i do tend to forget some setting though but suppose that comes the more you use em , off fishing today been doing that for years so ok at that
Opethian
Posted 18/09/2011 - 11:14 Link
I agree with Pentaxophile. You have the eye. Nurture that and you're bound to amaze people.
George Lazarette
Posted 18/09/2011 - 13:15 Link
nipper wrote:
George Lazarette wrote:
I am not keen on over-saturated colours, but these seem under-saturated to me. Is that deliberate, or does your monitor need calibrating?

G
his this better :
Yes, but I have just remembered that I am viewing on my laptop, which is not exactly wonderful itself.

G
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fatspider
Posted 18/09/2011 - 16:05 Link
Actually George I agree with you, with the exception of the first shot all of them are lacking any warmth which in turn is giving a feeling of under saturation, composition aside the problem with the majority of these is the lack of decent lighting, the last two in particular.

To be totally honest (re composition) with the exception of the first shot the rest just look like snaps to me (sorry Philip) having said that I am useless at Landscapes and wouldn't know what to look for anyway, perhaps your like me and destined to shoot wildlife
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George Lazarette
Posted 18/09/2011 - 22:23 - Helpful Comment Link
Yes, Alan, I think this is the problem. They were shot on a dull day, and there's not much you can do to rescue a picture shot in poor light.

Nipper, I'd recommend going back on a sunny evening, if you can wait for one.

G
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nipper
Posted 18/09/2011 - 23:26 Link
George Lazarette wrote:
Yes, Alan, I think this is the problem. They were shot on a dull day, and there's not much you can do to rescue a picture shot in poor light.

Nipper, I'd recommend going back on a sunny evening, if you can wait for one.

G
yep been back fishing to day George, had a quick go in sun lot better lesson learn't could be right Alan but i will keep at it, learn something every time i go. Also spotted some white egrets today and another pair of kingfishers but don.t think my backs up to it yet i/ve been using my sigma 10-20 but don;t really like it for landscapes find it to wide, there anyway, been using 16 45 today found that better, just a couple from today these look pretty good in full res on my laptop pity the chimneys did'nt have smoke bellowing out of em

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Edited by nipper: 18/09/2011 - 23:32
karma mechanic
Posted 19/09/2011 - 10:28 - Helpful Comment Link
It looks to me like some of these (the halo round the post in 7 in particular) have already been given a sort of HDR effect. What processing did you do to get to these images - in-camera or later on the computer?

As far as composition goes the difficulty is always that the actual scene might be a bit dull. You mentioned that you find the 10-20 too wide, it is certainly worth trying to get more impact by using the abrupt perspective of such a lens - try a much lower viewpoint or the lens angled down a lot to get something that goes from close to distant. Hard to say though - I wasn't there!
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