ePhotozine Challenge
Posted 31/05/2009 - 10:53
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hi pbabe, to me the pic is to busy and distracting, and the colours needs some adjustment,
just keep snapping,
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https://pentaxphotogallery.com/scottbenson
http://s727.photobucket.com/albums/ww272/scottthehat/
CAMERAS = k200d + battery grip.
nikon d300 + battery grip.
LENSES = tamron aspherical DII 18-200mm f3.5/6.3,
nikon 18-200mm afs vr f3.5/5.6 g dx
sigma 150-500mm apo dg hsm os
sigma 170-500mm apo dg
FLASH = samsung sef36pzf flash + more.
Posted 31/05/2009 - 10:56
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Thanks Scott,
I did try changing the colours but didn't like it. I am not really bothered how well I do in the challenge, more interested in any comments I recieve. I will have another go with the clematis, but it is very sunny in our garfde at the moment, so may be challenging!
I did try changing the colours but didn't like it. I am not really bothered how well I do in the challenge, more interested in any comments I recieve. I will have another go with the clematis, but it is very sunny in our garfde at the moment, so may be challenging!
Posted 31/05/2009 - 18:01
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Too busy, and there is no context, so no focal point.
the lighting is quite flat, and the contrast is rather boring.
Also the DOF is great, and I personally like it shallow on this type of subjects, BUT the petals in front of the centre of the flower are very distracting, and detract from the focal point of the flower.
Hope this helps,
the lighting is quite flat, and the contrast is rather boring.
Also the DOF is great, and I personally like it shallow on this type of subjects, BUT the petals in front of the centre of the flower are very distracting, and detract from the focal point of the flower.
Hope this helps,
Posted 01/06/2009 - 00:32
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With a tad more saturation'contrast it could have been a different image
When shooting flowers try to get the forground in focus instead of the middle of the flower use a decent aperture so more of the flower will be in focus.
Macro photography is initially really hard to do but keep practicing and it pays off
When shooting flowers try to get the forground in focus instead of the middle of the flower use a decent aperture so more of the flower will be in focus.
Macro photography is initially really hard to do but keep practicing and it pays off
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