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Posted 14/09/2013 - 10:44
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I dislike artificially done frames, but I can see what your thinking was, since the image is quite painterly.
I really do like the composition - the wooden circle, with the path curving round it nicely. Everything is very well balanced compositionally. Nice colours too.
I really do like the composition - the wooden circle, with the path curving round it nicely. Everything is very well balanced compositionally. Nice colours too.
Posted 25/09/2013 - 17:22
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I have retaken these shots so I will see what they come out like.
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Posted 25/09/2013 - 19:50
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All I can see is this grotesque frame which overpowers everything.
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Posted 25/09/2013 - 19:53
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I think the composition is very nice, the tree branch doesn't bother me at all, in fact I think it stops you're eye drifting off the edge of the photo.
The only thing I don't like is the blue tinge to the shadows.
Interesting how we all see images differently
The frame? A little overpowering......"less is more"
The only thing I don't like is the blue tinge to the shadows.
Interesting how we all see images differently
The frame? A little overpowering......"less is more"
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Michael
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Posted 25/09/2013 - 20:36
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Louise, I agree with the comments about the frame but, concentrating on the image, the first thing that I see is the very blue bias noted by Michael. However, it is not only the shadows - for me the white balance needs a significant adjustment towards the warmer tones.
Philip.
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Probably have to retake this shot...
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