De La Warr Pavilion

TonyM
Posted 10/11/2009 - 13:34 Link
Took some pics a couple of weeks ago and was thinking of putting them on a collage. Would like some C&C first please, in case it would be a waste of money!
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[IMG]http://i983.photobucket.com/albums/ae318/Stereoflab/_G204523.jpg[/IMG]
2
[IMG]http://i983.photobucket.com/albums/ae318/Stereoflab/_G204539.jpg[/IMG]
3
[IMG]http://i983.photobucket.com/albums/ae318/Stereoflab/_G204563.jpg[/IMG]
4
[IMG]http://i983.photobucket.com/albums/ae318/Stereoflab/_G204566.jpg[/IMG]
5
[IMG]http://i983.photobucket.com/albums/ae318/Stereoflab/_G204569.jpg[/IMG]
6
[IMG]http://i983.photobucket.com/albums/ae318/Stereoflab/_G204581.jpg[/IMG]
7
[IMG]http://i983.photobucket.com/albums/ae318/Stereoflab/_G204586.jpg[/IMG]

Thanks.

Tony
aminstar
Posted 10/11/2009 - 14:03 Link
Tony these are really great looking images. I like them. The last one with that bird flying just adds to the beauty of the image

I can also see that you have put the 12-24mm to great use for some of them
They look great
Dr. Mhuni
Posted 10/11/2009 - 14:07 Link
I like 5 & 6. Would clone out people it top right in 6 though.
Mhuni

500px
alig
Posted 10/11/2009 - 14:31 Link
Some great images Tony, loving nos. 3, 4 & 5, great composition and lighting.

1. too much foreground, crop off 'half' person on left.
2. not interesting enough for me.
3. very nice image, great composition and lovely lighting.
4. another cracker, would crop off roofline though.
5. superb image, great composition again.
6. agree with Dr above, would remove people.
7. wish that bird had been flying in, photoshop required!

Hope this helps, all just my opinion though.
Cheers

Ali

ist* DS & Ricoh GR
TonyM
Posted 10/11/2009 - 18:38 Link
Amin/Mhuni/Ali - thanks very much for your comments. (Amin, the 12-24 is SUCH a good lens, you can't go wrong!) I think I know what to do now. But, do I flip the bird or drag him to the other side? Decisions, decisions...
alig
Posted 10/11/2009 - 20:00 Link
Drag him to the other side Tony... may look better as we read left to right!
Cheers

Ali

ist* DS & Ricoh GR
thoughton
Posted 11/11/2009 - 01:48 Link
Number 5 and 6 for me. Perhaps a little more contrast in the last 4 photos.

5 in particular really floats my boat And is that a couple kissing in number 6?
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TonyM
Posted 11/11/2009 - 08:05 Link
Tim

Thanks for the comments. Contrast has been tricky with these - I'll give it a go. On the stairs I waited until the stairs themselves were clear and didn't worry about outside. I think they are kissing, which is clearly outrageous as this is Bexhill-on-Sea. Call the cops!!

Tony
GivingTree
Posted 11/11/2009 - 15:14 Link
I think a collage of these is a good idea. 3,4,5,6,7 will work well together.
Be interested in seeing what you come up with.
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