Dawn photos
Posted 17/10/2012 - 22:36
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Dusk and Dawn pictures really are my enjoyment.
For that I really have taken a liking in #1.
I do wish the shoreline was not cut though.
Considering how well you did on the bottom right corner, maybe you could have moved the tripod half a step to the left to keep the continous shoreline.
Besides that, lovely
#2 on the other hand could need a tiny bit of work.
Maybe make the clouds a little bit brighter.
If the detail is there, also bring out the ground a bit more. As of now, I keep wanting to appreciate the clouds, but my eyes keep wanting to go to that fuzzy tombstone.
Alternativly, make the clouds a bit brighter.
Darken the ground to make the tomb stone unreadable, and not just a distraction.
Then do a different crop so the bottom 1/3rd of the image is not just black without silhouettes or anything.
For that I really have taken a liking in #1.
I do wish the shoreline was not cut though.
Considering how well you did on the bottom right corner, maybe you could have moved the tripod half a step to the left to keep the continous shoreline.
Besides that, lovely
#2 on the other hand could need a tiny bit of work.
Maybe make the clouds a little bit brighter.
If the detail is there, also bring out the ground a bit more. As of now, I keep wanting to appreciate the clouds, but my eyes keep wanting to go to that fuzzy tombstone.
Alternativly, make the clouds a bit brighter.
Darken the ground to make the tomb stone unreadable, and not just a distraction.
Then do a different crop so the bottom 1/3rd of the image is not just black without silhouettes or anything.
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