Das Störrische Muli

muli



the picture was about a boardgame "Das Störrische Muli", cute illustration and fun gameplay

multiple exposure
dnp centuria asa 200
ME super with SMC-M 50mm
f2

did some pp, but not quite sure with the crop
what do you think?

Yes, I like it. I think it could be cropped tighter, esp on the rhs but it's a fun, appealing image. Perhaps the central figure is also a bit out of focus.

Are the streaks from the multiple exposure or reflections on a pane of glass?

thank you.
im sorry but what do you mean with rhs?
yes i agree with you about the central figure, i wish i could make it more focus.

the red streaks i think its from a reflection, i dont remember much but i believe there is a glass cupboard

rhs = right hand side (I guess). Agree that the image would bebefit from a tighter cropping, apart from that it's an image full of colour and fun.

ive done a little bit of PP..
now



original



did i make it better?
any suggestion/opion?

That's better. Cool shot!

Improved! You seem to have focused on the man to the left, and used a wide aperture, hence the shallow DOF.
Try to focus on the central figure and use a smaller aperture (higher f-number).

thank you so much!
will do better in the next shot! i hope

Iqbal,

This would be a good entry for the 'Childhood Memories' fortnightly competition...