Daisies by the road
Posted 01/06/2008 - 16:32
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I really like the bokeh and colours. For me, though, the void in the centre of the picture puts me off a little.
Posted 01/06/2008 - 16:40
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For me, there are too many daisies to look at, so I had a play with it - hope you do not mind :-
Hyram
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Posted 01/06/2008 - 19:05
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I love the crop and think the composition is good
Hyram you oversharpened that badly, you have made the bokeh grainy
Hyram you oversharpened that badly, you have made the bokeh grainy
http://www.behance.net/robbranigan
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Posted 01/06/2008 - 21:32
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Noted
Done in a hurry - should have left it just an altered crop
Done in a hurry - should have left it just an altered crop
Hyram
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Pentax Glass: DA* 300, DA* 60-250, DA* 50-135, DA* 16-50, DA 70 Ltd, FA 31 Ltd, DA 35 Ltd, DA 18-55 (2), DA 12-24, DA 10-17, M 200, A 35-70, M 40, M 28, Converter-A 2X-S, 1.4X-S, AF 1.7, Pentax-110 50, Pentax-110 24
Other Glass: Sigma 105 macro, Sigma-A APO 75-300
Flash: Metz 58 AF-1 P, Pentax AF160FC ringflash, Pentax AF280T
Bodies: K20D (2), K10D, Super A, ME Super, Auto 110 SLR, X70, Optio P70
Pentax Glass: DA* 300, DA* 60-250, DA* 50-135, DA* 16-50, DA 70 Ltd, FA 31 Ltd, DA 35 Ltd, DA 18-55 (2), DA 12-24, DA 10-17, M 200, A 35-70, M 40, M 28, Converter-A 2X-S, 1.4X-S, AF 1.7, Pentax-110 50, Pentax-110 24
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Posted 02/06/2008 - 01:10
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Darkmunk, nice job, with the caveats mentioned already about the centre being too empty. I did want to add, too, that you did well to get more than one of the daisies in focus, creating a nice balance with those that are blurred and those that are part of the bokeh. Keep it up!
Keith
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"The present is the object of vision, and what I see before me at any given second is a full field of color-patches scattered just so. The configuration will never be repeated." ~ Annie Dillard
K100D Super, DA 18-55, M 50 1.4, M 100 4 Macro
"The present is the object of vision, and what I see before me at any given second is a full field of color-patches scattered just so. The configuration will never be repeated." ~ Annie Dillard
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