Critique Please (3)

Pentaxophile
Posted 04/10/2013 - 12:11 Link
Maybe

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Edited by Pentaxophile: 04/10/2013 - 12:12
DrOrloff
Posted 04/10/2013 - 12:20 Link
Too much of a crop for this image and it limits the foreground which was the intention, but that would have been my approach to the shot.
MrB
Posted 04/10/2013 - 12:38 Link
For me there really is just too much water in the original, I feel as though I'm going to fall in. I would prefer less, to pull the eyes forward rather than down, but still retaining the river as the biggest area of the image, e.g. -

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Philip
Posted 04/10/2013 - 12:48 Link
I thank you all tremendously for the edits and feedback.

The River Bann is rich in history in Northern Ireland. As mentioned earlier I wanted to make it the emphasis in the shot.

having said all that the last edit by MrB is something that I MIGHT consider as an additional image.

Very good of you all.

Im more than happy to leave this one be now
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