Critique Please (1)
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I like the off centre mono version most out of the edits Pal, the highlight on the wall takes the eye to the flowers which then flows down the vase, if that makes sense!?
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Someone who likes the mono version. Its what I like as well.
The hardest thing about all of this is going with what YOU actually deem worthy yourself. BUT I am really thankful for everyones critique - its REALLY helpful
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To my mind, most of what I do is for myself, if I like it then it's good enough, if someone else then likes it its an added bonus and I suppose a good indication that I'm on the right track.
BUT!!
I need to up my medication if what I'm doing is for a *client!!
*The word client refers to friends and family LoL!!
The Doc's version is more assured and suits the subdued lighting better. I think.
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The main problem as far as I can see is the floral, fussy vase (nice enough as a vase) is fighting for attention with the flowers.
FWIW, I agree.
The strong lighting on the right hand side of the vase just keeps grabbing my eye.
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I dont think there is anything wrong with strong light so long as it doesnt overcome the texture - in this case of the vase. Its a vase full of flowers that has strong light coming from a window - thats the intention Ted
Ted?
Im going mad...
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This is my favorite so far, because it makes the vase and flowers standout
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