Critique Please (1)
Posted 03/10/2013 - 13:03
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This is as close as I can get I think?
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Posted 03/10/2013 - 15:22
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I like the off centre mono version most out of the edits Pal, the highlight on the wall takes the eye to the flowers which then flows down the vase, if that makes sense!?
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Posted 03/10/2013 - 15:33
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Thanks for the versions lads
Someone who likes the mono version. Its what I like as well.
The hardest thing about all of this is going with what YOU actually deem worthy yourself. BUT I am really thankful for everyones critique - its REALLY helpful
Thanks
bettyswolloks wrote:
I like the off centre mono version most out of the edits Pal, the highlight on the wall takes the eye to the flowers which then flows down the vase, if that makes sense!?
Hooray!I like the off centre mono version most out of the edits Pal, the highlight on the wall takes the eye to the flowers which then flows down the vase, if that makes sense!?
Someone who likes the mono version. Its what I like as well.
The hardest thing about all of this is going with what YOU actually deem worthy yourself. BUT I am really thankful for everyones critique - its REALLY helpful
Thanks
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Posted 03/10/2013 - 16:44
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No worries
To my mind, most of what I do is for myself, if I like it then it's good enough, if someone else then likes it its an added bonus and I suppose a good indication that I'm on the right track.
BUT!!
I need to up my medication if what I'm doing is for a *client!!
*The word client refers to friends and family LoL!!
To my mind, most of what I do is for myself, if I like it then it's good enough, if someone else then likes it its an added bonus and I suppose a good indication that I'm on the right track.
BUT!!
I need to up my medication if what I'm doing is for a *client!!
*The word client refers to friends and family LoL!!
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Posted 03/10/2013 - 18:12
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The main problem as far as I can see is the floral, fussy vase (nice enough as a vase) is fighting for attention with the flowers.
The Doc's version is more assured and suits the subdued lighting better. I think.
The Doc's version is more assured and suits the subdued lighting better. I think.
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Andrew
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Posted 04/10/2013 - 11:39
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Love it!
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Posted 04/10/2013 - 22:21
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bwlchmawr wrote:
The main problem as far as I can see is the floral, fussy vase (nice enough as a vase) is fighting for attention with the flowers.
FWIW, I agree.The main problem as far as I can see is the floral, fussy vase (nice enough as a vase) is fighting for attention with the flowers.
The strong lighting on the right hand side of the vase just keeps grabbing my eye.
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Posted 04/10/2013 - 22:24
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If I had drawn the curtain the ambient light would have been flat and just using the single light above was too much.
I dont think there is anything wrong with strong light so long as it doesnt overcome the texture - in this case of the vase. Its a vase full of flowers that has strong light coming from a window - thats the intention Ted
Ted?
Im going mad...
I dont think there is anything wrong with strong light so long as it doesnt overcome the texture - in this case of the vase. Its a vase full of flowers that has strong light coming from a window - thats the intention Ted
Ted?
Im going mad...
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Posted 04/10/2013 - 22:28
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michaelblue wrote:
Might as well put my oar in......
This is my favorite so far, because it makes the vase and flowers standout
Might as well put my oar in......
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