Critique Number 8

Posted 01/11/2013 - 21:18 Link
Heres a photo that I have reworked.

The original image was too over saturated and the lampost needed some seperation from the tree.

What you think?

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davidstorm
Posted 01/11/2013 - 21:31 Link
It's a nice image Alistair but I wouldn't say it's exceptional. I would like it more if the view was moved to the right slightly as it seems a little unbalanced in favour of the lamp post and would benefit from more of the road in view, disappearing into the distance.

In terms of the colour, this is probably more accurate to the way you saw it than the original version posted, I think somewhere in between the two would represent a good balance; maybe this one has a little too much yellow and the first one a little too much red?

I hope this is useful.

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David
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Posted 02/11/2013 - 09:01 Link
Thanks for the input David

Ill try and wrestle another one out!
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