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Posted 12/10/2007 - 06:04
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Nice shot Peter. What is the blue inlay in the gate is it stone or Metal :
I think i would have cropped out the right hand side the sky is very blown out and the out of focus sea. Its a shame as it would have made it a great shot.
I think i would have cropped out the right hand side the sky is very blown out and the out of focus sea. Its a shame as it would have made it a great shot.
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Posted 12/10/2007 - 08:06
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Really nice Peter. Try crop the water/sky away - and lets see it again!
Posted 12/10/2007 - 08:24
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Ok I will have a go tonight at losing the right hand side.....I quite liked the oof sea, and did try to darken the blown sky but it didnt look right.
I will get the Adobe scissors out later.
I will get the Adobe scissors out later.
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Posted 12/10/2007 - 08:34
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I agree with Nimitz. I find the sea, sky and oof plants distracting.
Kim
Kim
Posted 12/10/2007 - 09:16
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I quite like the composition as it is, it gives you a very good sense of place. Without the sea etc, you wouldn't know anything else about the ironwork. I get the impression it was in a villa, by a balcony overlooking the sea.
It all depends on what the point of the picture was. If it was purely as a study of the ironwork, then it probably falls a bit short. As a location shot, I think it works.
Dan
It all depends on what the point of the picture was. If it was purely as a study of the ironwork, then it probably falls a bit short. As a location shot, I think it works.
Dan
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Posted 12/10/2007 - 20:21
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I agree with Dan, leave it as it is and it screams out "cool villa balcony on a halcyon day!"
Posted 13/10/2007 - 13:45
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I like it - if the sky had been a bit darker then it'd be a very good shot.
Posted 13/10/2007 - 17:19
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I like it but I think it would be better without the OOF vegetation
Ken
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