Creeping Ivy

Ratcatcher
Posted 11/09/2009 - 12:38 Link
I was walking through a wooded area near a local park looking for something that hopefully would stand out, when i noticed these. One because of the creeping ivy and the other because of the coloured bark.

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Edited by Ratcatcher: 11/09/2009 - 12:48
Aiki
Posted 11/09/2009 - 19:15 Link
Are you asking for CC ?
If not, then sry....

I like the curves on the Ivy photo. Somehow I see a possibility for BW.
That brings the curves out better.

Bark has got nice colors. Why not to concentrate to the most colorful part of it ? Made it lighter and brighter with "levels" as well.

I had a quick try on both of the pics. Just to give the idea, in what direction I would go.

Its matter of taste, of course And your choice !

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Oggy
Posted 11/09/2009 - 22:32 Link
To my eye, the ivy is too bright a green in the first picture, but the colours in the second one are rather pleasing.
mikew
Posted 12/09/2009 - 07:33 Link
Maybe my eyes haven't woken up properly but neither looks sharp. Shots like these need a reason not be razor sharp. I fear a walk in the woods means taking at least a monopod and probably a tripod

You'll notice Aiki has cropped some off the bottom to get the ivy less central and in second one she has removed the distracting green top right.

Personally I don't think the B&W works but desaturating it might - that ivy screams at you!

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Ratcatcher
Posted 12/09/2009 - 11:09 Link
Thanks for the feedback, i must say that i don't think the B&W works for me but i think this one does.

All coments excepted & taken on board.

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Edited by Ratcatcher: 12/09/2009 - 11:34
Prieni
Posted 12/09/2009 - 12:14 Link
Hope you don't take exception on this one but rather accept it

I think the desaturation does work very well here. However, I would make the green a bit warmer (i.e. less blue, more yellow). And I would follow Aiki's crop here and take off a bit of the bottom.

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terje-l
Posted 13/09/2009 - 12:44 Link
Agreed, Richard, the ivy definitely needs the colour, and I like the green as it is.
Best regards
Terry

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Ratcatcher
Posted 13/09/2009 - 14:23 Link
Slightly cropped

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Aiki
Posted 13/09/2009 - 18:19 Link
nice
Aiki

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Thordell
Posted 13/09/2009 - 19:10 Link
I like the first one with the ivy against the gold of the bark with the cobwebs standing out clear, perhaps a little vivid but I prefer it to the mono versions. Do agree that a little needs to come off the bottom of the image to take the Ivy off center.
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