Creeping Ivy
Posted 11/09/2009 - 19:15
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Are you asking for CC ?
If not, then sry....
I like the curves on the Ivy photo. Somehow I see a possibility for BW.
That brings the curves out better.
Bark has got nice colors. Why not to concentrate to the most colorful part of it ? Made it lighter and brighter with "levels" as well.
I had a quick try on both of the pics. Just to give the idea, in what direction I would go.
Its matter of taste, of course And your choice !


If not, then sry....
I like the curves on the Ivy photo. Somehow I see a possibility for BW.
That brings the curves out better.
Bark has got nice colors. Why not to concentrate to the most colorful part of it ? Made it lighter and brighter with "levels" as well.
I had a quick try on both of the pics. Just to give the idea, in what direction I would go.
Its matter of taste, of course And your choice !


Posted 11/09/2009 - 22:32
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To my eye, the ivy is too bright a green in the first picture, but the colours in the second one are rather pleasing.
Posted 12/09/2009 - 07:33
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Maybe my eyes haven't woken up properly but neither looks sharp. Shots like these need a reason not be razor sharp. I fear a walk in the woods means taking at least a monopod and probably a tripod
You'll notice Aiki has cropped some off the bottom to get the ivy less central and in second one she has removed the distracting green top right.
Personally I don't think the B&W works but desaturating it might - that ivy screams at you!
Mike
You'll notice Aiki has cropped some off the bottom to get the ivy less central and in second one she has removed the distracting green top right.
Personally I don't think the B&W works but desaturating it might - that ivy screams at you!
Mike
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Posted 12/09/2009 - 11:09
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Posted 12/09/2009 - 12:14
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Hope you don't take exception on this one but rather accept it
I think the desaturation does work very well here. However, I would make the green a bit warmer (i.e. less blue, more yellow). And I would follow Aiki's crop here and take off a bit of the bottom.
Prieni
I think the desaturation does work very well here. However, I would make the green a bit warmer (i.e. less blue, more yellow). And I would follow Aiki's crop here and take off a bit of the bottom.
Prieni
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Posted 13/09/2009 - 12:44
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Agreed, Richard, the ivy definitely needs the colour, and I like the green as it is.
Best regards
Terry
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Terry
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Posted 13/09/2009 - 14:23
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Posted 13/09/2009 - 19:10
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I like the first one with the ivy against the gold of the bark with the cobwebs standing out clear, perhaps a little vivid but I prefer it to the mono versions. Do agree that a little needs to come off the bottom of the image to take the Ivy off center.
Jackie H
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