Cornwall

Posted 06/04/2008 - 19:47 Link
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I would like some feed back please. I took this in Looe, Cornwall
simonkit
Posted 06/04/2008 - 20:46 Link
I like the crashing waves and I can see your idea with the blurred foreground, for me though it's too dominant & really pulls my focus to it

just my thoughts

simon
Hyram
Posted 06/04/2008 - 21:33 Link
I find the blurred foreground somewhat distracting, possibly because I expect to see it in focus
Hyram

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Posted 06/04/2008 - 21:39 Link
Thanks Hyram and simonkit, I see what you mean, may be the foreground should of been in focus. I will post more in due course for feedback.
Utopia Poppy
Posted 07/04/2008 - 00:13 Link
Really nice shot of the waves, but I'm afraid I agree with the others - as I view the shot it feels like the foreground rocks are blocking the view. I feel like I just want to step to the right a bit!

I think if the rocks were in focus it wouldn't be so distracting.

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