Comments \ suggestions please

davex
Posted 07/12/2010 - 14:36 Link
Am interested in your views?;

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Or this one;

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Edited by davex: 07/12/2010 - 14:58
Don
Posted 07/12/2010 - 15:14 Link
Number one for me.
the blown highlights in number two are distracting.
now if you could get part way in between, and have the color from two and retain the detail in the ice from one, it'd be better all the way around.
Fired many shots. Didn't kill anything.
davex
Posted 07/12/2010 - 15:22 Link
Agree Don;

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Still not totally happy though, I am convinced there is a decent image here, just cannot find it .

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davem
Posted 07/12/2010 - 20:05 Link
The colour best in your last post but,I think that the rock in the foregound is out of focus and distracting.

Dave
fritzthedog
Posted 07/12/2010 - 20:32 Link
Forgive the liberty - but I have cropped and played with it a little but I am not certain I have really added anything. It feels like one of thise shots that 'should be' but somehow just isn't quite

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regards
carl
No matter how many lenses I have owned - I have always needed just one more
Stuey
Posted 07/12/2010 - 20:38 Link
I have similar shot taken yesterday - the idea seemed great at the time but the photo, no matter how much mucking about with just doesn't seem to do it

Therefore, I can understand the frustration

If you do find out how to turn this into the shot you hoped for I will take note of how it's done if the secret is released
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bretti_kivi
Posted 08/12/2010 - 06:59 Link
whitebalance, white level maybe....

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thoughton
Posted 08/12/2010 - 09:46 Link
Whitebalance in the first one looks okay to me, the others all look too blue. Although I seem to have been saying that a lot recently, I'm starting to wonder if it's this monitor
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davidtrout
Posted 08/12/2010 - 10:33 Link
Your third attempt is by far the best. The blue cast is easily remedied by selectively slightly desaturating the worst affected areas.
David

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