Clouds and sea

ChrisA
Posted 10/10/2007 - 16:39 Link
Looking east over the Pacific from a spot on the coast north of Sydney.

The polariser is mostly responsible for the look of the sky; apart from that I've only compressed the levels a bit.

Thoughts?

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Malo1961
Posted 10/10/2007 - 20:02 Link
Hi Chris,
I love the sky. It's really brooding. Maybe you could crop of a bit of the sea. One third or so. And perhaps some enhancement of the red. Push up the contrast a bit to give it a little more bite ? I feel it is a little bit to flat. But that is only my taste of course.

Best regards,
Martin.
Best regards,

Martin.


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johnriley
Posted 10/10/2007 - 20:46 Link
The sky is great but the boat isn't as sharp as the sky, which is a shame. I agree about cutting out a bit more of the sea and also darkening the image a little to emphasise more that fantastic sky.
Best regards, John
ChrisA
Posted 10/10/2007 - 23:25 Link
What do you think now?

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Mac
Posted 10/10/2007 - 23:30 Link
"ChrisA"]What do you think now?

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johnriley
Posted 10/10/2007 - 23:42 Link
Tighter composition and a more powerful image.
Best regards, John
Malo1961
Posted 11/10/2007 - 05:46 Link
Much better, this way. More balance and more bite

Ps, have you considered the mono approach?

Best regards,
Martin.
Best regards,

Martin.


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