chips and salad in profile

K10D
Posted 14/11/2010 - 09:45 Link
Two girls, different activities

chips and salad

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any C&C welcome

Best regards
Too far from a shore.
Gwyn
Posted 14/11/2010 - 10:09 Link
I like the first one best. Well captured and perfect in b/w.
A pity she can't spell Mediterranean .

The second doesn't do a lot for me I'm afraid.
K10D
Posted 14/11/2010 - 10:28 Link
Thanks Gwyn.

Any better in mono?

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Best regards
Too far from a shore.
i-Berg
Posted 14/11/2010 - 10:38 Link
The tones are lovely in the first. The second is a little passive perhaps, more of her face in the shot may have changed that?
Gwyn
Posted 14/11/2010 - 10:42 Link
It is better in b/w certainly, but as i-Berg suggests I think a little more of her face would have helped. If she had just brushed those front strands of hair back it would have made a difference. As it is you can't see much of her profile, just a lot of hair.
K10D
Posted 14/11/2010 - 11:19 Link
I'll re-name it to mop?

Neither girl was aware of the shot and it was quite windy.

Best regards
Too far from a shore.
MarkD
Posted 14/11/2010 - 12:35 Link
I prefer the colour version....... Not enough contrast in the B&W to separate her face from the background in my opinion..... For what it's worth....
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bwlchmawr
Posted 14/11/2010 - 13:13 Link
I like them both but the second one does need just a little more face.
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aliengrove
Posted 14/11/2010 - 21:29 Link
I like the first one, agree with the comments about her face re the second one, though I prefer the colour version of it.
darlene
Posted 15/11/2010 - 05:59 Link
B&W are great for capturing detail feature. Draws your attention to the person face. So #1 is for me.
puma
Posted 17/11/2010 - 19:17 Link
Great detail and I like em both B/W and colour but is that mike Jackson lol no only joking great photo.
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