Beach pics.
Posted 19/10/2009 - 17:29
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nr 2 is interesting. Still bit too strong attention going to up left.
I like the style. but maybe composition could be bit better.
I like nr 3 too. I would crop out quite lot from right and also bottom. So that the focused part (plant) will come to the right lower 1/3 point. It will give better direction to the pic as well.
My opinion only.
I like the style. but maybe composition could be bit better.
I like nr 3 too. I would crop out quite lot from right and also bottom. So that the focused part (plant) will come to the right lower 1/3 point. It will give better direction to the pic as well.
My opinion only.
Posted 19/10/2009 - 17:32
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Ohw, I'd missed these! I, too, really like no. 3 and no. 5, though I think the last one might have been even better in portrait mode. I love the beach and the sea! Great pictures!
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Posted 19/10/2009 - 17:38
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Number three the fence and grass is the one that appeals most but it might be an idea to desaturate it a bit just to tone it down. Fiddling with the crop would probably get a better composition.
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Posted 19/10/2009 - 21:41
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Numbers 3 and 5 for me
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Posted 20/10/2009 - 18:45
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Not bad shots. Overcast days like this are easy on the white balance but difficult on the final projection of strong punchy colours. I like the idea of picture no 1. Try it again may with less cluttering. It seems to be a little too busy. Otherwise great idea. The fourth last shot is great! Really nice selective cropping and desaturation. I would recommend on days like these to shoot in black and white and tweak you contrast slightly. They will have another affect. keep on shooting
Posted 20/10/2009 - 19:59
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Some nice images Lee, my favs are 2, 3 and 5.
Nice abstract in 2, like the composition and DoF in 3 and just like the tones, crop & feel of 5.
Nice abstract in 2, like the composition and DoF in 3 and just like the tones, crop & feel of 5.
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Posted 21/10/2009 - 14:16
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#5 It makes me fell like I could walk down that cookey path...Like the crookness in the shot...
Posted 23/10/2009 - 20:40
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Thanks for all the pointers and advise.
Taken on board ready for next time.
Taken on board ready for next time.
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Posted 23/10/2009 - 22:35
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No.s 3 and 5 for me as well. 3 is a fantastic shot, I would be tempted to crop a little off the left.
No. 4 is a bit too saturated for my taste.
Good series!
Prieni
No. 4 is a bit too saturated for my taste.
Good series!
Prieni
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