Autumn Leaves

Aitch53
Posted 28/10/2015 - 20:07 Link
A couple of shots from my living room window. Both with the K-S1/50-200 lens.

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I suppose, artistically, they re a bit meh, but the almost monochrome black/blue background with the sparse splashes of yellow/brown engenders a mild melancholy for the death of this last summer. Or is that just me?
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davem
Posted 28/10/2015 - 20:12 Link
I prefer number 1. perhaps it would be more arty if the top third was cropped out?
Aitch53
Posted 28/10/2015 - 21:05 Link
I get what you mean, but I think that way the leaves would be more evenly spread whereas the way it is now you get a sort of thinning out of the leaves as you move up, until there are none. If you see what I mean.
SteveH!

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McGregNi
Posted 29/10/2015 - 08:29 Link
Good exposure which allows the rich colours in the leaves to shine through. I love my blue skies, so No1 for me. I agree that a tighter crop would help. Maybe next time you could try zooming in closer to a smaller group of leaves.
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Aitch53
Posted 29/10/2015 - 16:19 Link
I think I see where you are coming from. You are concentrating on the leaves whereas I am concentrating on the lack of leaves, the fact that they are disappearing for the year. Of course, I could be talking rubbish and maligning you all, in which case, my apologies.

How about this one, does it get the message across better?

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A lot more post processing, mind you.
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McGregNi
Posted 29/10/2015 - 17:33 Link
Yes,I think that is more focused and direct. Of course the quality is coming down with that much cropping, but if you could shoot at a longer zoom setting that would help. I prefer the layout of that last one with the leaves dividing the frame.
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