Autumn Leaf

tyronet2000
Posted 29/10/2011 - 22:39 Link
C & C please

[IMG]http://i1100.photobucket.com/albums/g406/tyronet2000/AutumnColours-wb-3-leaves.jpg[/IMG]
Regards
Stan

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trickletreat
Posted 29/10/2011 - 22:41 Link
It works for me, I like the colours and composition and abstract feel.
Nigel
Mannesty
Posted 29/10/2011 - 22:42 Link
Good idea and reasonably well executed but the stalk of the leaf (it is only one leaf, isn't it?) needs more work to make it convincing.

Well done.
Peter E Smith - flickr Photostream
tyronet2000
Posted 30/10/2011 - 07:41 Link
Mannesty wrote:
Good idea and reasonably well executed but the stalk of the leaf (it is only one leaf, isn't it?) needs more work to make it convincing.

Well done.
I agree the stalk doesn't look right, I think it lost "definition" when changing the background colour (and removing the Blu-tak from the end). Not being an artist I don't know how to make the stalk look more real so any tips there welcome. I think I'll try again with another leaf, using a piece of plain white paper for the bg.

Thanks to all for the kind comments.

Regards
Regards
Stan

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