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Aiki
Posted 03/06/2009 - 21:08 Link
Sth that I am late with.... but CC is welcome as usually

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Tony-O
Posted 03/06/2009 - 21:15 Link
I like this Aiki,muted colours,natural light,movement in the hand,nice depth to it.The pots look interesting too.I have a feeling a little crop here and there might improve it,not much just a tweak.Tony.
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Edited by Tony-O: 03/06/2009 - 21:16
Aiki
Posted 03/06/2009 - 21:18 Link
another try is this

Tony-O, crop from where ?

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and a real mess like this

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Edited by Aiki: 03/06/2009 - 21:34
Tony-O
Posted 03/06/2009 - 21:36 Link
Hi Aiki,My feeling was sort of like this.I think it brings a bit more focus on the the work in progress.Comment Image
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fatspider
Posted 03/06/2009 - 22:40 Link
Nice shot Aiki, I prefer the first one and Tonys suggested crop.
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Aiki
Posted 04/06/2009 - 07:33 Link
Thanks ! I agree
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shim
Posted 04/06/2009 - 08:15 Link
The crop removes all the depth from the original. It's unfortunately what magazine editors do all the time.

I like the 1st one as it is.

shim
Tony-O
Posted 04/06/2009 - 08:45 Link
shim wrote:
The crop removes all the depth from the original. It's unfortunately what magazine editors do all the time.

I like the 1st one as it is.

shim
shim.I think ''all''is an overstatement,although i would agree the crop reduces some of the sense of depth.It depends really on what Aiki want's to convey with this picture,my cropped version is one possible result.
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Hyram
Posted 04/06/2009 - 08:49 Link
I prefer Tony's cropped version.

It could be eligible for the "Hands" competition
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Aiki
Posted 04/06/2009 - 14:26 Link
Hyram wrote:
I prefer Tony's cropped version.

It could be eligible for the "Hands" competition
When I heard about the compet People at work, I knew at once, that I want to get hands on pic. But unluckily I couldnt organize time for taking the shots. And then the new theme Hands quite surprised me. I felt as if my idea was stolen
Now I could go at least to one of the spots I was interested in.

Also we have Hansa days in Tallinn now - lot of wonderhul possibilities I am longing for....but the weather is so damned rainy
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Aiki
Posted 04/06/2009 - 14:31 Link
Tony-O wrote:
It depends really on what Aiki want's to convey with this picture,my cropped version is one possible result.
With original pic - more "working". All the stuff around gives some feeling as well.
The cropped version is more for "Hands".
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