Artistic Terns

bforbes
Posted 19/05/2014 - 20:13 Link
These were taken with a DA300+1.7AF. I don't think they are in the same league as those taken by Blythman and Tomkeet, when testing the Pentax 560+1.4x combination.

However when looking at them I thought the shapes of the terns in flight were quite artistic, so I've tried to process them with that in mind.

What do you think?

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McGregNi
Posted 19/05/2014 - 20:21 Link
The shapes of the wings make these, and the soft rim-lighting adds beauty to it. The first one lacks these qualities so is the weakest I think. 2 & 4 have the bird perfectly placed in the frame. I'm no birdy person, but I can really appreciate these!
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geordie01
Posted 19/05/2014 - 21:37 Link
Well I think they are great, must get down the beach.
Stuey
Posted 19/05/2014 - 21:59 Link
I like these

I can't pick a favourite though
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coker
Posted 19/05/2014 - 22:08 Link
In photographing creatures such as these, all we can hope to achieve is is to add another layer of beauty, however slim that veneer may be.
With these images, you have succeeded with some style!

Thanks for letting us see what you saw.

Roger.
The more I look, the more there is to see!
Edited by coker: 19/05/2014 - 22:10
MattyH
Posted 19/05/2014 - 22:26 Link
Superb, with also a touch of

I myself find the first one I keep going back to, but like I said they are all superb.
Blythman
Posted 19/05/2014 - 22:27 Link
Very nice Barry. Its difficult getting flight shots using the 1.7x and you've cracked it.

I know you use lightroom, I'd be inclined to lift the shadows a bit to put a little bit more light under the wings.

On #1 I'd use the temperature eye dropper on the rump of the tern just to make sure you haven't a colour cast. Maybe you already have
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Edited by Blythman: 19/05/2014 - 22:29
davidstorm
Posted 19/05/2014 - 22:28 Link
Very nice Barrie, I like the second one in particular. These birds are so graceful and I think your shots illustrate that perfectly.

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Puggy
Posted 19/05/2014 - 22:37 Link
Another vote for No2, the out of focus backdrop (sand dunes?) really brings it out of the ordinary

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bforbes
Posted 20/05/2014 - 08:34 Link
Thank you all for commenting. I'll give your suggestions a try.

geordie01 wrote:
Well I think they are great, must get down the beach.
Puggy wrote:
Another vote for No2, the out of focus backdrop (sand dunes?) really brings it out of the ordinary
Not the beach or dunes, one of the pools outside RSPB Saltholme
alfpics
Posted 20/05/2014 - 21:21 Link
Number 2 for me - the blurred background gives something other than just plain sky yet doesn't distract from the subject.
Andy

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