Another from the camera club

tyronet2000
Posted 04/07/2014 - 17:57 Link
Eloise, at the camera club. C&C's welcome

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Algernon
Posted 04/07/2014 - 19:24 Link
Nice shot and nice lighting. Very pretty girl and I like
hair dyed red, but her's is just a bit too bright on top.
Probably needs to go to a better hairdresser

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McGregNi
Posted 04/07/2014 - 19:56 Link
Its a good relaxing pose with nice skin tones and sympathetic exposure. I'm not so convinced about the greenery though, which I find clashes somewhat with the subject.
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davidstorm
Posted 04/07/2014 - 20:02 Link
It's a touch out of focus Stan, I prefer the one you posted on the Gallery as this has a nicer feel to it.

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tyronet2000
Posted 04/07/2014 - 20:36 Link
Thanks for the constructive comments. I wasn't too keen on the greenery either. For focus I'm relying on the "beep" and green lozenge and maybe should have used different aperture for more dof.
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Stan

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Blythman
Posted 04/07/2014 - 20:39 Link
davidstorm wrote:
I prefer the one you posted on the Gallery as this has a nicer feel to it.

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Agree David
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Algernon
Posted 05/07/2014 - 11:19 Link
The one in the gallery is nice as well and her hair is
a better colour. It must be the light on this one that
has made it too bright.

I don't bother too much about portraits being in focus.
Some of the best I've seen are OOF inc. some by Bailey
such as this......

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Algi
Edited by Algernon: 05/07/2014 - 11:19
tyronet2000
Posted 05/07/2014 - 14:25 Link
Thanks for the kind comments and the link Algi, THAT was the look I was after but didn't quite get it right
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Stan

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Algernon
Posted 05/07/2014 - 14:36 Link
Takes a bit of practice!

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Stuey
Posted 06/07/2014 - 13:38 Link
I like them both but the one in the gallery, as mentioned above does seem better
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