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Posted 27/10/2019 - 19:16 - Helpful Comment
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cardiffgareth wrote:
I've called this almost as for me the image is almost there but missing something
Depends whether you prefer questions or answers. I've called this almost as for me the image is almost there but missing something
It works well for me as it is, because it asks questions - Why is nobody there? Who was there a few minutes ago? Who is approaching out of sight of the camera? What are the dark shapes in the background? Is it safe to walk along the path?
Adding a child in a bright coloured coat or a couple walking romantically would provide an answer. Reassuring and safe rather than disturbing and dangerous. Still a valid picture, but a very different one. No right, no wrong, just different.
Keep taking 'em like this, I like questions!
Steve
Posted 28/10/2019 - 00:10 - Helpful Comment
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Excellent point Steve. How about a bicycle abandoned somewhere in the pool of light? That gives questions AND focus.
Posted 28/10/2019 - 08:04 - Helpful Comment
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Yes... as above... great mood to this Gareth... plenty of possibilities in your original... most of them dark in my mind... so how about a passing clown?
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Posted 28/10/2019 - 08:52 - Helpful Comment
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As is is good for me. However another version with a figure just visible leaving (or maybe entering) the distant spot of light would also be good IMO providing further mystery rather than necessarily being dark.
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Posted 28/10/2019 - 09:17
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Thanks all, all excellent points raised and something for me to develop on
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Posted 29/10/2019 - 08:19 - Helpful Comment
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Evocative image Gareth as commented above. Good image. Good work.
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Too far from a shore.
Posted 29/10/2019 - 20:39 - Helpful Comment
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I'm all for (apparent) emptiness, so this works just fine for me. Plenty of space for imagination, interpretation, contemplation... Nice one, Gareth.
Posted 29/10/2019 - 21:42 - Helpful Comment
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Now I do really like this image.
Maybe the peacefulness of it--with an expectation of a possible otherwise. Just allowing for reality to be what it is.
Sure do like it!
Angky.
Maybe the peacefulness of it--with an expectation of a possible otherwise. Just allowing for reality to be what it is.
Sure do like it!
Angky.
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Posted 30/10/2019 - 16:25
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Thanks all, seems the image can have 2 personas, one with something added in to add a further element of interest or left alone to allow the viewer to think more about how it is 'as is'
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Posted 30/10/2019 - 19:25 - Helpful Comment
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Think I like this more without the 3rd pole light out to the left. Looks to help reinforce the leading lines of the first two.
Could be wrong. Just held my thumb over the phone screen to test, as I wait for my bus to work in New Zealand...
Could be wrong. Just held my thumb over the phone screen to test, as I wait for my bus to work in New Zealand...
Posted 02/11/2019 - 09:56
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How is New Zealand? On my bucket list!
You could be right, or at least if I cloned it over so it fell more in line with the other 3 and not slightly too far over to the left like it is now
You could be right, or at least if I cloned it over so it fell more in line with the other 3 and not slightly too far over to the left like it is now
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Posted 02/11/2019 - 15:57 - Helpful Comment
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A broken doll lying on the ground, abandoned.....
Great ideas flowing for this one!
Great ideas flowing for this one!
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Posted 03/11/2019 - 01:31 - Helpful Comment
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johnriley wrote:
A broken doll lying on the ground, abandoned.....
Great ideas flowing for this one!
Cracking image as is, but as has already been suggested, added dimensions are definitely an option for this, A broken doll lying on the ground, abandoned.....
Great ideas flowing for this one!
I think John is on the right track in the sense that something completely out of place would work.
Might be worth try a few out just to see,
Think they need to be big enough to be recognisable like an open umbrella or a shopping trolley , dining chair, car seat whatever.
Cracker.
I know what i like, If not always why.
Posted 03/11/2019 - 19:50 - Helpful Comment
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I showed this to an artist friend today. He thought it doesn't need anything else in it, it's very good as it is.
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