A Grey Day on Lindisfarne


bforbes

Link Posted 26/04/2014 - 11:16












All C&C would be appreciated please.
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CMW

Link Posted 26/04/2014 - 11:42
Good decisions for an overcast day. I particularly like no.1.

I wonder whether the boats photo would be stronger by cropping out the rt-hand boat (?). You'd lose the symmetry, but also the clutter.
Regards, Christopher

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bforbes

Link Posted 26/04/2014 - 13:53
I think you'r right.
CMW wrote:
I wonder whether the boats photo would be stronger by cropping out the rt-hand boat (?). You'd lose the symmetry, but also the clutter.



Barrie
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bwlchmawr

Link Posted 26/04/2014 - 19:39
My favourite is no.3 but the composition is very "tight". Of course, I've no idea of the circumstances, but the edges appear cut off, if you see what I mean. I'd certainly clone out the angular iron-work near Lillian's bows. Considering the typically English sky, there's lots to enjoy here.
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bforbes

Link Posted 27/04/2014 - 09:52
bwlchmawr wrote:
My favourite is no.3 but the composition is very "tight". Of course, I've no idea of the circumstances,

More "stuff" at the sides I'm afraid. I'll try cloning out the iron work on CMW's crop version.

cardiff_gareth wrote:
It looks pretty bleak there, or maybe my phone screen is giving them that impression!!

Did you stack the stones?!

It's an island in the North Sea, therefore bleak by definition

As for the stones I was beaten to it


Barrie
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gwing

Link Posted 27/04/2014 - 12:16
bforbes wrote:
bwlchmawr wrote:
My favourite is no.3 but the composition is very "tight". Of course, I've no idea of the circumstances,

More "stuff" at the sides I'm afraid. I'll try cloning out the iron work on CMW's crop version.

cardiff_gareth wrote:
It looks pretty bleak there, or maybe my phone screen is giving them that impression!!

Did you stack the stones?!

It's an island in the North Sea, therefore bleak by definition

As for the stones I was beaten to it


Wow that's a lot of stones! Not a lot for the locals to do on the island?
Last Edited by gwing on 27/04/2014 - 12:17
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