The Gateway Arch in St. Louis, Missouri, USA
by Wildwood512
The arch sits at the site of St. Louis' founding on the west bank of the Mississippi River.
The Gateway Arch was designed by Finnish-American architect Eero Saarinen and German-American structural engineer Hannskarl Bandel in 1947. Construction began on February 12, 1963, and was completed on October 28, 1965. The monument opened to the public on June 10, 1967.
Great colours and good composition, especially the use of the framing by the dark foreground foliage....Best Regards..tommyt.
Interesting stack between foreground and background. I should have preferred just a little bit of more cropping on the dark(black)in foreground...till at green trees at middle-bottom.
Thanks for the feedback! This photo was already heavily cropped from it's original much larger composition, yet I can see how a tighter compo would be nice. As I played around with coloration, I just loved where it was going in contrasting the dark looming foreground, framing the radiance of the arch and subsequent foliage below it's one leg. Gave me the sensation that the arch was dispelling the darkness. Metaphorically...out of the darkness and into the light.
Great colours and good composition, especially the use of the framing by the dark foreground foliage....Best Regards..tommyt.
Interesting stack between foreground and background. I should have preferred just a little bit of more cropping on the dark(black)in foreground...till at green trees at middle-bottom.
Thanks for the feedback! This photo was already heavily cropped from it's original much larger composition, yet I can see how a tighter compo would be nice. As I played around with coloration, I just loved where it was going in contrasting the dark looming foreground, framing the radiance of the arch and subsequent foliage below it's one leg. Gave me the sensation that the arch was dispelling the darkness. Metaphorically...out of the darkness and into the light.
...I do like your reply. You are right about Metaphor....Your Mataphor is a LONG JUMP into Light...into a different world. Your Metaphor brings me back to Dante and Divina Commedia or to Eneide and Virgilio...when talking about Caronte(Charon)....BUT your arch brings us to LIGHT....toLiving Peoples...This is thepower of Photography and PENTAX!!!
Great colours and good composition, especially the use of the framing by the dark foreground foliage....Best Regards..tommyt.
Interesting stack between foreground and background. I should have preferred just a little bit of more cropping on the dark(black)in foreground...till at green trees at middle-bottom.
Thanks for the feedback! This photo was already heavily cropped from it's original much larger composition, yet I can see how a tighter compo would be nice. As I played around with coloration, I just loved where it was going in contrasting the dark looming foreground, framing the radiance of the arch and subsequent foliage below it's one leg. Gave me the sensation that the arch was dispelling the darkness. Metaphorically...out of the darkness and into the light.
Like your logic, excellent work
Well, for a first image you have really made a flurry, optically, metaphorically and almost metaphysically, although I'm not sure which side of the square Giulio is on? I agree with him about the dark portion at the bottom, which might be amenable to some detail recovery and lightening, rather than cropping if you still have the original.
Oh yes, David, I can certainly lighten up the bottom and tighten the crop as well. I did have it lighter but went with the darker and aligned the arch footing square on the bottom horizon line of thirds. Wasn't going for anything but my interpretation and liking, somewhere between Superman's Metropolis and Batman's Gotham! With that said, I immensely appreciate every ones take on it! What fun!!!!
Photography is not a sport. It has no rules. Everything must be dared and tried! (Bill Brandt)
PPG
I'm currently researching family in MO! The darkness in the foreground forces the eye up to the primary subject which is no bad thing! You've made a great start to building your portfolio here Donna!
Thanks for your the glowing review, Paul!
Giulio, good one...a LONG JUMP into light....!
Great colours and good composition, especially the use of the framing by the dark foreground foliage....Best Regards..tommyt.
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