Before Her Debut


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Also shot in our company's annual dinner. She is a good singer with a clear voice.
17/01/2011 - 07:58gustavjin
CategoryPortraits / People
Shutter Speed1/45
ApertureN/A
LensN/A
ISO1600
Focal Length50mm
Views/Likes37/0

bwlchmawr

Link Posted 17/01/2011 - 20:05
It's a potentially good shot and a great subject, but the framing is a let-down, in my opinion. You've cut her off at the shins the left big dead areas at the top. You've got lots of pixels to play with so I'd attempt a severe crop to focus on her more closely.

Hope you don't mind my comments: they are kindly meant.
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gustavjin

Link Posted 18/01/2011 - 03:46
bwlchmawr wrote:
It's a potentially good shot and a great subject, but the framing is a let-down, in my opinion. You've cut her off at the shins the left big dead areas at the top. You've got lots of pixels to play with so I'd attempt a severe crop to focus on her more closely.

Hope you don't mind my comments: they are kindly meant.

Thank you for your suggestion. Actually, I am not satisfied with this picture since what you see is what I shot and the time is not enough for me to get a second one. Therefore, I would reframe it as per your suggestions.
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