St Pauls

Good crop and compo. On my screen photo appears a little bit underexposed.

Yes, I see same.

Me three - needs some manipulation in levels.

SMarsden, I hope you don't mind but I took the liberty of adjusting the levels and here is the result:
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Hope I have given you some idea - you will be able to do a lot more with the original file.
Cheers

I hear what you're all sayin

I was going for a lower key process. keeping it dark with details... sometimes it works some times its back to the drawing board