In the Woods
by davidstorm
Shot with the K-5 and Asahi Pentax SMC Takumar 135mm F3.5 and a little bit of fill-in flash to remove the shadows.
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Uploaded26/03/2012 - 21:16
CategoryPortraits / People
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Posted 26/03/2012 - 21:22
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timbo wrote:
Great shot, but I'd remove that twig from by her eye.
Great shot, but I'd remove that twig from by her eye.
Cheers Tim, shows I'm not a true professional like you because I never even noticed it! I have spotted something else too - there's a tiny amount of bra cup showing behing Michelle's hair on the left as you look at it - should this also be cloned out?
Regards
David
Posted 26/03/2012 - 21:29
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davidstorm wrote:
There's a tiny amount of bra cup showing behing Michelle's hair on the left as you look at it - should this also be cloned out?
timbo wrote:
Great shot, but I'd remove that twig from by her eye.
Great shot, but I'd remove that twig from by her eye.
There's a tiny amount of bra cup showing behing Michelle's hair on the left as you look at it - should this also be cloned out?
Well spotted with the cup, yes I'd clone it out and also fill in the bit of skin showing with some of the dots as well, as a small chink of skin can be distracting.
Fortunately I don't really have problems with bits of bra cups showing
Posted 26/03/2012 - 21:38
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timbo wrote:
Well spotted with the cup, yes I'd clone it out and also fill in the bit of skin showing with some of the dots as well, as a small chink of skin can be distracting.
Fortunately I don't really have problems with bits of bra cups showing
davidstorm wrote:
There's a tiny amount of bra cup showing behing Michelle's hair on the left as you look at it - should this also be cloned out?
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Great shot, but I'd remove that twig from by her eye.
Great shot, but I'd remove that twig from by her eye.
There's a tiny amount of bra cup showing behing Michelle's hair on the left as you look at it - should this also be cloned out?
Well spotted with the cup, yes I'd clone it out and also fill in the bit of skin showing with some of the dots as well, as a small chink of skin can be distracting.
Fortunately I don't really have problems with bits of bra cups showing
I've cloned the twig out now on my version at home and it is much better. I might have a go at removing the bra (so to speak); I hope this won't get misconstrued by anyone, especially my wife!
Regards
David
Posted 26/03/2012 - 22:25
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Love this shot, i didn't notice the twig at first, but i like the sharp contrast of the model against the pale green wood of the tree.
Posted 27/03/2012 - 08:14
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timbo wrote:
Great shot, but I'd remove that twig from by her eye.
Great shot, but I'd remove that twig from by her eye.
Yep, the master is right.
Love the natural V shaped frame. Try a square crop (it's obvious where it should go.
I'd like a go with that lens!
Best wishes,
Andrew
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Andrew
"These places mean something and it's the job of a photographer to figure-out what the hell it is."
Robert Adams
"The camera doesn't make a bit of difference. All of them can record what you are seeing. But, you have to SEE."
Ernst Hass
My website: http://www.ephotozine.com/user/bwlchmawr-199050 http://s927.photobucket.com/home/ADC3440/index
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