Meghann 2

by autumnlight

Tried again with the eyes in better focus, She's more than happy i removed her blemishes.
Uploaded22/02/2011 - 14:19
CategoryPortraits / People
Shutter Speed1/15
Aperturef/4.5
LensN/A
ISO400
Focal Length133mm
Unique Views / Likes1/0

daph
Posted 22/02/2011 - 16:15 Link
i like this!
you can teach an old dog new tricks
Edited by daph: 22/02/2011 - 16:17
bwlchmawr
Posted 22/02/2011 - 16:45 Link
100% better. If she sees you can do this, the she'll be more than happy to sit for you again. What a difference it makes to get her eyes in focus; to a certain extent, the rest of the shot can take care of itself. Lovely expression, too. This would work exceptionally well in mono, I reckon.
Best wishes,

Andrew

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GIULIO57
Posted 22/02/2011 - 17:06 Link
Sunny subject...beautiful portrait
sandinista
Posted 22/02/2011 - 18:42 Link
Very well taken, great portrait
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autumnlight
Posted 22/02/2011 - 20:15 Link
Thank you for your kind comments.
Kind regards Maria

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szgabor
Posted 22/02/2011 - 20:22 Link
Nice shot, she has beauty smile. Against it I prefer the previous version. That was more natural for me.
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Gábor
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autumnlight
Posted 22/02/2011 - 20:30 Link
bwlchmawr wrote:
100% better. If she sees you can do this, the she'll be more than happy to sit for you again. What a difference it makes to get her eyes in focus; to a certain extent, the rest of the shot can take care of itself. Lovely expression, too. This would work exceptionally well in mono, I reckon.
Thank you Andrew,really appreciated coming from such a good photographer as your self, she's my niece who i only see about 3 times a year as she lives in Scotland.
Kind regards Maria

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autumnlight
Posted 22/02/2011 - 20:32 Link
szgabor wrote:
Nice shot, she has beauty smile. Against it I prefer the previous version. That was more natural for me.
I agree with you i prefer the first one too as you said more natural, thank you Gabor.
Kind regards Maria

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senn
Posted 22/02/2011 - 21:22 Link
I opt for the previous one too .. for the same reason.

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puma
Posted 23/02/2011 - 08:57 Link
Great portrait,Good back light and focus,and crop really well done i will keep my eyes on you lol getting better n better
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autumnlight
Posted 23/02/2011 - 16:35 Link
Thanks Shaun that's really kind but i think it'll take quite a bit longer to get to your level.
Kind regards Maria

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